Player Comments on Quinn

I found that the story itself was rather interesting for what it was trying to achieve. You were trying to spend a day in the life of Quinn and for the most part it was interesting, but then it suddenly ended after P.E class which was rather dissapointing as I was enjoying this.

Anyway, the grammar was ok and didn't have any major errors, though I must admit, some pages were rather short and lacked any sort of description.

The game in itself is quite interesting and has fairly good grammar, but it is way too short for it to be truly enjoyable. However, even short as it is, I did enjoy it a certain degree, so I'll give it a 4/8.

I was very confused with this story. They have lunch twice in one day. He says that he did the math homework during lunch that day and then after math he has lunch. I am also confused on why the main character wants to please Michael. Does the main character have a crush on Michael? I don't know because there is nothing saying that, and the main character gives ten dollars to a girl because he loves her. That's just not a good enough reason to me.
Does she need the ten dollars?
Where's the back story?
What are the characters personalities?
I know nothing about them or why they are doing the things they do.

IT ENDS AT A CLIFF HANGER!!! BAH!

Eh, I would say it was relatively short. You might need a theme more people would enjoy, as this doesn't really appease me.

But it has potential and keep up the good work, thanks :)

Skeleton.

This was a pretty fun story game and had clever humor. A tad too short, but that's okay. Keep up the good work!

Somewhat sort, but enjoyable!