Player Comments on Tenebrae

It's Fine.

"Continue thrugh the open expance
You continue to journey through the rugged terrain, never stopping, never looking back, only one thing in mind, but that thing never comes, you become the hopeless traveler, the one who never found peace, the one who just continued on..."

Well yeah, of course, that's what we call a restless spirit ;)

Is there any ay not to die, become evil, or give up!
Good game though.

Very well written.

Great writing. I find that you do descriptions really well and I really feel the moment when you write it. That said, I do have to agree with the other comments about the lack of backstory. Better than I could write in 90 minutes, that's for sure. 4/8.

Kinda lame kid. Even if it was a 90 minute story, you could have least put more thought into it.

Wasn't the most interesting, but intriguing at the least.

It was a short story, but an intriguing one at that.

It was kind of interesting, but I don't really get it. I think the poetic style of writing and the whole idea of a world with no light are kind of cool, but you didn't explain why the world was dark or who the character was or anything like that.
Still, not bad considering you wrote it in 90 minutes. ^_^

Even though it was written in 90 minutes, I feel that you could have thought a bit more about the backstory before writing. It would have been interesting to include flashbacks of the person's life, and a bit more description of whatever limbo/hell you're stuck in. Sorry, 3/8. There's a reason for the time limit.