Player Comments on The Onlooker.

I thought that your story line was very unique and interesting. I thought that for some of the questions, you didn't really have a choice but to choose some of the options. And that you could've lead the person playing to other routes of the story line.

A super engaging story that makes you want to get out of the box. The moral undertone is great in having the reader realize that maybe they are doing the same as the player and acknowledge what is good from the bad. I enjoyed how the text was written and the description of the setting that provides a better context. Choices were believable in what people would choose. The choices also foreshadowed what would happen next after picking them which gave the player motivation to pick the better option of the two.

Good job Ashley, I liked how you took a abstract and moralistic approach. I also like how the reader is left to interpret the ending in their own way.

Good job Ashley, I liked how you took a abstract and moralistic approach. I also like how the reader is left to interpret the ending in their own way.

The story was very engaging. It had me on the edge of my seat, wondering how I would get out and what else could possibly happen. It felt like the choices I made mattered. Sometimes I was a little confused about which could be better but I think it really matched how you would feel in that situation. You had as much knowledge as the person you were playing. It was a really good story!

The game was fun and a bit sad at times. Such a deep story throughout the game

Good read!

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