Player Comments on The Psycho's Quest

This storygame is ok but it just lacks detail and oomph for it to be really entertaining. Who are you, who and why did you kill someone, and why is such a supposedly timid and gentle character suddenly killing everybody without hesitation or remorse?

Also, quite a few spelling errors.

I have so many questions, like why did he kill that man? Did he try to remove any evidence? Do the cops catch up to him? There are so many loose ends that I would like the answer to. Aside from that it was an entertain, rather short, story.

I love spooks. I love this game. I is murdererrrrrrr

Pretty impressive. Although there were some grammar blunders, when you develop, I hope you'll get better at it!

Pretty good, would like more options and less spelling errors tho :P

Thank, enjoy choosing option.

(Damn this game has been around for a really long time.)

I like the premise, wish the game was more fully developed. Some spelling errors but still pretty interesting overall.

short&sweet

The story wasn't really that good. First, if there is going to be a cop who hears the sound of a river and the splash of a body, wouldn't he try to search for who is creating that sound? Also, I want to know how a random hooker came up, also, if your going to have a hooker come up to have some fun, you just created a machure situation, at least explain the details of what's going on. If you don't, your creating a random situation with literally no sort of thing at all that could add to the story, and it is just random. If you add more details to the story, improve your grammar, and work on a few things with not making the story so linear, this would be great.

Nice.

The story idea is pretty good, and the choices aren't bad. More detail is definitely needed, as right now, there isn't really any emotional connection to Jadis. With a background as to why he killed someone, it would really improve. Also, grammar and punctuation could be greatly improved.

I wish there was more detail so that way I had at least an idea what could happen with some of my choices.

this was pretty fun. I went the no witnesses route and when a hooker called me ugly I killed her

Well, Oops? I burned myself to death. So disappointed in myself. :/

I think that the idea is really good, there were a lot of things you could've done with the premise. But I feel that you didn't use this premise to its full potential. but it's still good for a first story game. And I think a remake couldn't hurt.

Interesting. . . but it could certainly use better grammar and spelling. Also more story, It felt really lacking.

that game was awesome pretty short though

It was decent. 4/8

Maybe too short, however I died twice. It is a good one, I recommend, unpredictable deadly RPG bullshit in every corner, 10 out of 10

Good enough game. I like the storyline, but the punctuation is really messed up. Good job as a first story!

Not bad for your first.

Very good for a random story.

well done for a first try.

Creatvie to say the least.

pretty cool

well its okay for a fist attempt

It's really good for a first game. I think if you add more detail it will really add to the story. Let the reader see what Jadis is seeing. It will make your next story so much better!

Good for a first game but you need to try harder with your grammer and such.

Very good for a first game. The only thing I had a real problem with from what I played is that in one of the choices when crossing the road it says you're run over, but in the other choice it says no-one is driving at 3 AM. Yes, I know the cab could have driven up in the time spent waiting, but it just seems a bit awkward. Still, most first games don't have a serious tone so that's a big plus for me right there.

Lewd photos have no place in my life!

This was a good story, and was boosted even more up there because it was your first. What an awesome game. Well done.

Longer than most people's first games. Needs better spelling and grammar, though.

Not the best written, but fun. There were a few story arcs, and I liked them all, particularly when I got to kill the whore. Nice! Try editing a bit, particularly near the end of that arc, and add some more plot.

Too linear but okay.

disturbing.

This was actually pretty good, playing it the hooker way, lol. Danny, what a funny way to write!

Midly disturbed, but you did have a decent storyline. Not too bad, though it was a bit too short. This was pretty good for a first game.

It was ok, I think that it was a good idea that could be improved apon. 3/10

not a bad first game, but lacks many possible options which could make it more entertaining. It's kind of disturbing, but i've seen worse. If you could have worked in the guy's psychosis a little better i'd have been into it.

Not too bad. I wonder where those photos came from...

is.. there a point to this game? all you do is kill people and go home.

Danny: Not a bad game. I made it "home free" although i think an insane man would have chosen differntly. Keep the stories. I hope more people will write horror/survival cyoas enough to make it a category. If you have time try the midget story from smallfry. the dude

Well honestly i thought the story line was boring, so i guess there would be no use of putting "make story longer". But there were no spelling mistakes which really adds to the story. I would rate it 5/10.

this game is messed up. i would have taken the whore to iowa.

LEARN HOW TO SPELL!!!!