Player Comments on Cole Matthews and the Island

Confusing for readers who haven't read the story. I did actually read this for class once, but even though the story just describes one piece of the puzzle, it isn't as mentally satisfying. It's possible to not leave the readers hanging with "a day in the life of ___" stories, but it's not easy.

Alright story, but I dunno the characters.

Well, the story was well written, but doesn't make any sense to someone who hasn't read the book. I have no idea who this guy is or why he lives in the forest, or who Peter is, or why Peter tried to kill himself or what that has to do with the rest of the story.