Briar_Rose, The Contributor

Member Since

10/28/2012

Last Activity

9/25/2019 12:49 PM

EXP Points

103

Post Count

3637

Storygame Count

4

Duel Stats

797 wins / 436 losses

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Marauder Exemplar

Commendations

97

Hi everyone! For any of you Price of Freedom readers out there, I just wanted to let you know that while, unfortunately, a sequel hasn't been published yet, there is an updated version available on dashingdon. Here's the link: https://dashingdon.com/play/averymoore/the-price-of-freedom-innocence-lost/mygame

The update includes:

The options to play as male or female.
The player gets to choose their own name.
Five stats, as opposed to the original two.
Two extra chapters.
More detailed backstory for the MC, and a lot of the other characters.

If you want to keep updated on The Price of Freedom, or any of my other games, you can follow me on social media at:

https://www.facebook.com/AveryMooreGames/

https://twitter.com/Avery__Moore

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points Having 2 Storygame(s) Featured For your wily assassin ways! ^v^ Given by EndMaster on 05/14/2014 - For utterly crushing all competition at the Spring Thing 2014! Given by Fleshnblood_78 on 05/29/2017 - Because I was impressed with the stuff I've read from you. Given by Will11 on 01/14/2018 - For your fantastic stories, especially Price of Freedom

Storygames

Disney Trivia Quiz

So you think you know your Lion Kings from your Little Mermaids? Take the Disney Trivia Quiz and see how much of a cartoon junkie you really are.

A very big thank you to Aman for proofreading. ^_^


Marvel Adventure

This is game that I made with my nephew. He's six years old and he really, really likes Marvel Superheroes. (I might've helped with the writing a little bit, but he came up with the stories all by himself.) ^_^


Featured Story Quest for the Holy Grail

A noble quest based on the film Monty Python's Holy Grail. This game is completely pointless and is basically me playing around with the Advanced Editor to see how it works. Hope it's fun anyway!


Featured Story Tower of Riddles

Updated version, same game less spelling mistakes. Huge thanks to BerkaZerka for play-testing! ^_^

You are trapped in an medieval tower dungeon, which is never a good way to start your day. Luckily there seems to be a secret passage for you to escape through. All you have to do is solve a few riddles and you're free as a bird. Easy right? Just so long as you don't get a riddle wrong, then you die a horrible death... Good luck!

(It is definitely possible to win this game, once you figure out how.)


How To Write A Storygame
unpublished

hewo everywon!!! my nam is kittymewmew568 and i am 12! this my fist game i hop u lik my gam so r8 da game 8 out 8 an if u dont lick it ten GTFO DUN SAY NUFING BAD BOUT MY GAM MY GAM ID AWESOME SO FUK U!!!!1!!1!1

(Never read what you've written before you post it. You're a busy person, what with school and Fortnite marathons, and smashing the like button on all your favourite douchetubers and stuff. You just don't have time for trivial things like checking for spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, you should always pretend to be younger than you actually are. It'll make everybody feel sorry for you, and they'll all be really kind and understanding of your terrible writing. If that doesn't work... Just tell people how to rate your game. Let them know that they should give your game a really high rating and leave you lovely, encouraging comments, otherwise they might forget. And of course, tell all those haters to fuck off in advance. There will always be cyberbullies telling you mean and horrible things like, "you should try harder," or "37 words is a bit short for a CYS game," but fuck all of them! They're just jealous of you anyway.)


Test 2
unpublished

Hi guys! Don't bother reading this, it's not a game I'm just doing some testing to see what variables factor into game length. I'll unpublish it again soon.


The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost (Original)
unpublished

This game is the original version of The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost, published as an entry for the 2014 Spring Thing competition. An updated version of the game has been released. It contains three more stats, a choice of names for your character, the option to play as either male or female, two extra chapters, far more background and character development, and is over twice as long as the original, with a total of over 100,000 words.

The updated game can be found here: http://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-price-of-freedom~3a-innocence-lost

You are 10 years old when you first feel the weight of shackles around your wrists. In a matter of hours, your whole world is turned upside down as you are dragged away from your home in Greece to work as a slave in the Roman Empire.
Now you must struggle for survival. Every decision you make will affect your future. Will you make friends or enemies? Will you submit to your masters or fight your every command? Will you sell your soul to earn your freedom, or sacrifice everything for the people you love? Will you even survive long enough to see the sun rise?


Witchcraft and Wizardry
unpublished

"Dear Student, we are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted at Hogwart's School of Witchcraft and Wizardry." In this game you play through a year as a student at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, where you'll attend classes, learn magic, meet new friends and try to help your house to win the House Cup at the end of the year.


Recent Posts

The new Price of Freedom now released! on 3/30/2019 6:38:12 PM

D'awhh! Mizal, you're awesome! heart


The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost on 3/30/2019 6:34:02 PM

OMG, I love this guy so much! Sorry, but I just has to share! ^_^
 


Plagiarism FTW! on 3/30/2019 5:52:08 PM

I'm considering posting some screenshots... But if I do, I think I'll do that in another thread. cheeky


The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost on 3/30/2019 5:50:51 PM

D'awh! Thank you! heart


The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost on 3/30/2019 5:48:33 PM

I did? I was unaware of the kerfluffle. cheeky


The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost on 3/29/2019 7:40:41 PM

Ah, okay... But the original game was entered into the Spring Thing contest, so... Doesn't that make it ineligible? cheeky


The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost on 3/29/2019 7:29:07 PM

I know, I'm a very bad person. sad


The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost on 3/29/2019 7:12:45 PM

Thank you! Super happy it's published now. Can't wait to see what people think of it... Hopefully it's not too similar to the original that people find it pointless.


The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost on 3/29/2019 7:01:14 PM

Awhh! What's the Best of 2019 contest? surprise


The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost on 3/29/2019 6:49:28 PM

I know, I'm a very violent person for having all my naughty opinions. cheeky