Briar_Rose, The Reader

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1/13/2019 2:26 PM

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Hi everyone! For any of you Price of Freedom readers out there, I just wanted to let you know that while, unfortunately, a sequel hasn't been published yet, there is an updated version available on dashingdon. Here's the link: https://dashingdon.com/play/averymoore/the-price-of-freedom-innocence-lost/mygame

The update includes:

The options to play as male or female.
The player gets to choose their own name.
Five stats, as opposed to the original two.
Two extra chapters.
More detailed backstory for the MC, and a lot of the other characters.

If you want to keep updated on The Price of Freedom, or any of my other games, you can follow me on social media at:

https://www.facebook.com/AveryMooreGames/

https://twitter.com/Avery__Moore

Trophies Earned

Having 2 Storygame(s) Featured For your wily assassin ways! ^v^ Given by EndMaster on 05/14/2014 - For utterly crushing all competition at the Spring Thing 2014! Given by Fleshnblood_78 on 05/29/2017 - Because I was impressed with the stuff I've read from you. Given by Will11 on 01/14/2018 - For your fantastic stories, especially Price of Freedom

Storygames

Disney Trivia Quiz

So you think you know your Lion Kings from your Little Mermaids? Take the Disney Trivia Quiz and see how much of a cartoon junkie you really are.

A very big thank you to Aman for proofreading. ^_^


Marvel Adventure

This is game that I made with my nephew. He's six years old and he really, really likes Marvel Superheroes. (I might've helped with the writing a little bit, but he came up with the stories all by himself.) ^_^


Featured Story Quest for the Holy Grail

A noble quest based on the film Monty Python's Holy Grail. This game is completely pointless and is basically me playing around with the Advanced Editor to see how it works. Hope it's fun anyway!


Featured Story The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost

You are 10 years old when you first feel the weight of shackles around your wrists. In a matter of hours, your whole world is turned upside down as you are dragged away from your home in Greece to work as a slave in the Roman Empire.
Now you must struggle for survival. Every decision you make will affect your future. Will you make friends or enemies? Will you submit to your masters or fight your every command? Will you sell your soul to earn your freedom, or sacrifice everything for the people you love? Will you even survive long enough to see the sun rise?


Tower of Riddles

Updated version, same game less spelling mistakes. Huge thanks to BerkaZerka for play-testing! ^_^

You are trapped in an medieval tower dungeon, which is never a good way to start your day. Luckily there seems to be a secret passage for you to escape through. All you have to do is solve a few riddles and you're free as a bird. Easy right? Just so long as you don't get a riddle wrong, then you die a horrible death... Good luck!

(It is definitely possible to win this game, once you figure out how.)


How To Write A Storygame
unpublished

hewo everywon!!! my nam is kittymewmew568 and i am 12! this my fist game i hop u lik my gam so r8 da game 8 out 8 an if u dont lick it ten GTFO DUN SAY NUFING BAD BOUT MY GAM MY GAM ID AWESOME SO FUK U!!!!1!!1!1

(Never read what you've written before you post it. You're a busy person, what with school and Fortnite marathons, and smashing the like button on all your favourite douchetubers and stuff. You just don't have time for trivial things like checking for spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, you should always pretend to be younger than you actually are. It'll make everybody feel sorry for you, and they'll all be really kind and understanding of your terrible writing. If that doesn't work... Just tell people how to rate your game. Let them know that they should give your game a really high rating and leave you lovely, encouraging comments, otherwise they might forget. And of course, tell all those haters to fuck off in advance. There will always be cyberbullies telling you mean and horrible things like, "you should try harder," or "37 words is a bit short for a CYS game," but fuck all of them! They're just jealous of you anyway.)


Murder at the Manor
unpublished

Four mysteries in one. A man has been murdered in his stately home in the country and you have only four suspects. Can you figure out who the killer is? Well guess again... And again... And again! Because the killer is selected at random at the beginning of every game.

Note: This game was originally made for a competition put together by Morgan R where writers had to make the best game they could in a day. Unfortunately, I didn't get the game finished in time, so never got around to publishing it, but I stumbled across it a few months later and decided it was worth finishing. So here it is, hope you enjoy ^_^


Test 2
unpublished

Hi guys! Don't bother reading this, it's not a game I'm just doing some testing to see what variables factor into game length. I'll unpublish it again soon.


Recent Posts

Interesting comments 3 on 1/12/2019 4:54:11 AM

Awh! I wanted to read that. crying


Price of Freedom is Back on CYS!!! ^_^ on 1/10/2019 4:00:24 PM

Awh, nobody wants my nudes. crying


Price of Freedom is Back on CYS!!! ^_^ on 1/10/2019 3:59:32 PM

Yes! Sketches, definitely (since I do all my own artwork anyway.) I'm coming up with other ideas too... But I think I'm going to concentrate on getting Innocence Lost ready to publish... Then fix patreon. Then put a link to the patreon in the blurb of the game. Then publish it. ^_^


Price of Freedom is Back on CYS!!! ^_^ on 1/10/2019 3:56:30 PM

Nah, I've already put the original Lawless Ones up for everyone to see. I'm going to offer the whole "exclusive access to new content" thingy, but that would only apply to new content, and the original TLO is old content, so... Yeah, freebie.

The whole thing's here if anyone wants to read it. ^_^

https://dashingdon.com/play/averymoore/villains/mygame/index.php?cb=48182


Price of Freedom is Back on CYS!!! ^_^ on 1/10/2019 3:52:57 PM

OMG, that's so unbelievably generous! Thank you! As soon as I've gotten POF transferred onto CYS, I'm going to start putting together a proper patreon, which actual decent rewards for everybody, and I have a really good idea for th $20 tier, that I'm pretty sure you're going to love. ^_^


Price of Freedom is Back on CYS!!! ^_^ on 1/9/2019 5:19:34 PM

Oh, you are going to LOVE the sequels. Just for you, I'm adding a scene where the main character and Lula are having a conversation about the colosseum, and it goes more or less like this:

MC: Well, it can't be any worse than it is here.

Lula: Of course it can! Haven't you heard the rumours? I hear they have these giant see-saws, and they sit the prisoners on them, tied up... Then they let a bunch of lions and tigers out and the prisoners have to jump as high as they can on the see-saws to get away from them. Oh, and they tied up another bunch of prisoners and lay them all on the ground... Then they brought in this elephant, and the elephant stomped on their heads and crushed them one by one! You know, I even heard that one time, they threw this naked woman into the arena, and then she got raped by a giraffe!"

MC: Are you serious? Lula, that's crazy! There's no way that can be true.

Lula: *Shrugs* It's what I heard...


Price of Freedom is Back on CYS!!! ^_^ on 1/9/2019 4:02:47 PM

Oh, wow! That's amazing! I was actually kind of in shock when I saw it. Thank you so much! heart

But... Dude, are you sure? $20 a month is a LOT of money.


Poll:Should CoG mods(except Gower)be guillotined? on 1/9/2019 1:43:17 PM

I prefer Kevin. ^_^

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yuwprXAaSv0


Price of Freedom is Back on CYS!!! ^_^ on 1/9/2019 4:57:34 AM

Wait... Are you the one who signed up for $20 a month? surprise


Price of Freedom is Back on CYS!!! ^_^ on 1/8/2019 10:15:57 AM

Well, all I can say is that I really should've gotten some sleep before I put this thing up, because my brain is literally comprehending nothing right now. Important thing is that it exists, and I can always edit it later.

Will get started on the update of Innocence Lost as soon as I get the okay from CoG I mean, I did sign the contract with HG, but since they're unable to publish it anyway, I assume I can get the game back. cheeky