Player Comments on Demon slayer: Sakura's mission

I think this is a decent first start. The grammar could use a bit of work -- I recommend giving it a more thorough proofread. However, the atmosphere and suspense-building is great. While I think this story has a lot of potential, if a bit more work was put into it, it isn't complete. Although there's been some successful stories on this site that were told in multiple parts, each individual part needs to be its own complete story (like books in a series). This only took me about five minutes to finish.

I would thoroughly enjoy reading more of this, but I think you should wait until it is complete and well-polished before publishing. There is the option to put your game on "sneak preview" mode while you write subsequent parts, that way you can receive feedback while your work is still unfinished.