Player Comments on In Fear of an Ego Death

Hi, author of the story here. I was relating a drug experience as accurately as I could. I was very confused during the experience. I think the value of the story comes from the web of choices you have to make to get to one of the two endings. I'm sorry you don't like it, but to me, it was worth making and I fulfilled my purpose. Ciao

Some people can handle writing under the influence, some can't.

oaflopean is in the latter category.

The text was obnoxiously huge for no discernible reason other than to fulfil its primary function of being obnoxiously huge. The story made no sense whatsoever, even for a parody. A lot of choices were highly irritating and took you back through several branches, further frustrating the reader.

However, everytime I got that shitty passage about plants and the death of the ego, I could not help but burst out laughing. Half the time it was nothing to do with plants. It was just...I don't know, it put a smile on my face. It just made no sense and it cracked me up.

It was still awful and I'll probably never play it again, but the amount of times I was forced into the page about psychedelic plants just made my day.

I don't want you to get this the wrong way, but I HATE it, I mean the whole thing makes no freaking sense, I mean who the hell am I supposed to be, where am I in the first place,... To make a long story short, this sucks, worst story ever

This is, perhaps, the WORST story game I have ever had the misfortune of reading. Do the world a favor and NEVER publish anything like this again.