Player Comments on Jesuit Missionaries
Educational, but not really a CYS.
on 12/27/2017 3:50:54 PM with a score of 0
Keep up the good work.
on 12/4/2017 1:09:08 PM with a score of 0
A good school project with some interesting writing and pictures, could have been longer :)
on 10/11/2017 1:11:55 AM with a score of 0
Grammar was a little off in places, but as far as school projects go the writing on this was pretty decent. Though it could have been more involving, right now it is very dry and reads...pretty much exactly like a school project.
And just pointing out it should probably go in the Edutainment section.
Also just for future reference, if you write something just for your teacher or otherwise a small, specific audience, you can put the story on sneak peek and just give them the link if you'd prefer not to invite criticism and feedback from random internet people.
on 10/10/2017 10:34:39 AM with a score of 0