Player Comments on Journeyman

Hmm. Well, this was very interesting. I didn’t look to find each of every ending, but the way it was written is certainly above the level of first time writer. The first few pages were a bit blank but you did include good vocabulary to describe some surroundings and people. Though there is not much plot, it changed a simple clickthrough-style game into one of mild intrigue. There is still a lot of improvement to be made, but I am very impressed!

It is very bold of you to have your first game as an Advanced Storygame. Knowing how much time it takes to fully grasp the entire system, I can certainly say that you have a lot of potential. Keep writing!