Player Comments on Mercenary Queen (Part 3): The Hemlock Band (Act B)

Pretty different from regular story games.
-- Reywalker786 on 4/26/2019 3:15:32 PM with a score of 0
It is a well written story however it went from 0-100 extremely quick due to the first few choices which I won't spoil for weirdos who look at reviews first. I believe that at the end it may have been better to make the game keep track of choices rather than the player themselves choosing. It was also slightly short but the writing makes up for it. Very good, anticipating the sequels.
-- William5738 on 8/4/2018 6:13:41 PM with a score of 0
-- PrincessStarlight on 4/30/2018 10:24:35 AM with a score of 0
Please make another one with more of it
-- ugg on 1/27/2018 5:14:07 PM with a score of 0
Played through the rest of the paths during lunch earlier and uh, yeah this a pretty rapey game. The writing is above average and it's otherwise a nice classic D&D style fantasy adventure, though the POV switching got bad at certain points. That and the colored dialogue were the main issues as far as the technical stuff goes.

Also, I feel like it would be worthwhile for you to incorporate some basic scripting instead of asking the player what they'd found or chosen earlier to determine the ending. Just use a variable so the game itself can keep track.
-- mizal on 2/15/2017 11:31:39 PM with a score of 0
Well that went from zero to rapey to raped to death fast. I've had a brief look at the other games in this series in the past and been meaning to give them a read through, I guess now would be a good time if you're actively working on them again. Though I'm curious whether the ending I got just now is a common one for these stories.

Spotted a few typos and punctuation writes, and fyi the colored dialogue is REALLY obnoxious. Thaw may be a deal breaker for some people.
-- mizal on 2/14/2017 8:23:37 AM with a score of 0
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