Player Comments on Wedding For Spud

Funny, very sarcastic. I like it. Though there are many grammar mistakes and not many characters. I suggest you edit it and proofread well.

5/8

— Critic on 11/23/2015 12:43:10 AM with a score of 0

You crack me up good.........for you to poop on

— Pewdiepie10 on 4/13/2015 8:27:15 AM with a score of 0

One word: horrible.

— WarriorCatsRPStories on 2/25/2015 4:20:05 PM with a score of 0

The choices didn't really make a difference. The point of Choose Your Adventure is for the reader to have the freedom to choose the experience. If everything is the same, the reader doesn't have a choice.

Your grammar could use some work. You miss capitalizing the first letters of several sentences. I'm not quite sure how people can forget to do that.

— Bucky on 2/25/2015 12:14:36 AM with a score of 0