Player Comments on What just happened?

What just happened?

"This is my first game, so don't judge me if its bad! "

Nope. Sorry. That's not how it works.

This is pretty bland and boring. It's either a test game that you should've kept unpublished, or it's a real game and you just didn't put any sort of effort. In either case, 1/8.

It had multiple choices but nothing really seemed to happen... people enjoy reading because it takes them out of their every day world and into something more exciting, if we woke up and there was a small dinosaur sleeping on the floor that would be unusual, if we wake up, reset the alarm clock and go back to sleep well... deja vu :)

Still there were no spelling mistakes and the branching worked well but you need more of a story or a hook to draw the reader into this.

:) hey guys... The title isn't right but I couldn't change it... A lag keeps happening... It's supposed to say getting ready for school. This is based on me and the designs I have every day. So please comment if you don't like it that's fine but please don't comment about how horrible it might be and stuff like that! Thanks,
~alexy