Player Comments on A Lost Home

Try to avoid first page end game links, those are anoying. Give the story more than five pages, then we can realy know rather or not its worth expanding. The thing is, if you can finish a story, it was worth writing. Your first finished story, good or not is your stepping stone to your next story.

I don't really think you can judge a 5-page story. I would expand it before asking it to be judge.