Player Comments on A Walk in'a Park

It's another one of these.

I'm surprised with the amount of branching, but the overall quality is just sad. A good sign that a storygame isn't so nice is the line counter(that usually doesn't apply to longer pieces), when you have an average of 4 lines in each page, we've really got nothing to work with.

I understand this is a test, but don't publish it if so. Effort is required for a storygame to stay up, you know.

If you don't have any plot and any exciting thing to write about. Don't write. Seriously, this is far more boring than reading the instructions on a cereals package.