PerforatedPenguin, The Journeyman Scrivener
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11/13/2020
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7/26/2024 8:09 PM
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Alternatively, try my foray into Grimdark Fantasy: The Red Church.
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An ambassador to a distant civilization, you return home just in time to find the Sol system on the brink of destruction. Rally your fellow humans, if you can. You've been gone a long time, but they haven't changed, at all.
"In your dreams, you see the crimson spires rise from the fog menacingly... a voice, whispering 'come back' over, and over again."
Author's Notes
Entry for Endmaster's Prompt Contest 3, 2024
Prompt: A story about making a deal with a demon/devil.
Author's Notes
Entry for Endmaster's Prompt Contest 3, 2024
Prompt: A story about making a deal with a demon/devil.
Temp-CrisisEntry
unpublished
Placeholder. If you are really curious, you may read the first two pages that I've written, and not a word more.
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Recent Posts
Thunderdome 14: Yummyfood vs mrcrimsonclean! on 7/26/2024 12:49:27 PMAbsolutely no recollection. Was I around for that?
Thunderdome 14: Yummyfood vs mrcrimsonclean! on 7/26/2024 12:41:20 PM
Fuck, I thought I knew who was who after you spoiled one in the discord, but these plot twists have been getting me again and again.
Black, Female or Gay? on 7/26/2024 12:38:29 PM
Now send a recording of you reading this out loud
By Far The Most Retarded Thing Ever on 7/25/2024 4:55:03 PM
post here
By Far The Most Retarded Thing Ever on 7/25/2024 4:54:35 PM
told to
By Far The Most Retarded Thing Ever on 7/25/2024 4:54:14 PM
I was
Thunderdome 14: Yummyfood vs mrcrimsonclean! on 7/23/2024 3:27:16 PM
I could barely read these without the lesbian flag+rainbow background and comic sans
But my vote is for Story B.
Story A had an engaging exposition but it seemed to drag on for a little too long before arriving at the scene with Sharon and Magnus. I don't know if it was the dialogue or premise, but I found it hard to take the story seriously with an ending like that. Still, a solid story overall imo.
In contrast, I think story B showed a stronger grasp on writing and was more measured out. Nice job to both contestants.
But my vote is for Story B.
Story A had an engaging exposition but it seemed to drag on for a little too long before arriving at the scene with Sharon and Magnus. I don't know if it was the dialogue or premise, but I found it hard to take the story seriously with an ending like that. Still, a solid story overall imo.
In contrast, I think story B showed a stronger grasp on writing and was more measured out. Nice job to both contestants.
By Far The Most Retarded Thing Ever on 7/21/2024 6:37:52 PM
I think you should read that again.
Weekly Review - Issue 51: Cursed on 7/20/2024 5:59:10 PM
We’ve celebrated more than 6 birthdays, silly.
Weekly Review - Issue 51: Cursed on 7/19/2024 6:07:48 PM
