PerforatedPenguin, The Dramatist
Member Since
11/13/2020
Last Activity
1/26/2021 2:59 PM
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Hey! I'm PerforatedPenguin, but everyone here calls me Peng. I enjoy writing, and fancy myself decent at it.
If you have anything you want to talk about, or to ask about dueling, feel free to message me.
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Storygames
Matter of life and death
unpublished
A snow-capped mountain.
A survivor from a plane crash.
How will he survive?
Does it even matter?
Peng's Happy Place
unpublished
I flounder here, happy.
Sentence
unpublished
An ancient ghost, calling out toward you...
It yearns for relief from being trapped eternally.
Open the various doors with help from clues, and strive to learn the story of Frea, the heir to an ancient aristocratic family.
Recent Posts
Parallel universes on 1/26/2021 2:15:30 PMKinda like the butterfly effect where, a minute seemingly unimportant decision can affect things completely unrelated?
Help on introducing the character on 1/26/2021 2:13:40 PM
A good trick is not to list out what the character is like, but "show don't tell", right?
You can convey how you want the character to be like through sets of actions and decisions, it's a better way for the audience to immerse in their character, and without it sounding too dry.
Remaster of an old story? on 1/26/2021 12:54:39 PM
1. If you think you can remake that story into a satisfactory one, go ahead and modify it, as it will be less effort since you already had the structure and plot. Otherwise, a fresh start does offer more freedom as well.
2. Don't worry about people stealing, we all know the who wrote those paragraphs(besides, there's no point in stealing, right?)
Heck Yeah! on 1/22/2021 9:57:56 AM
Great to hear.
Hybrid Schedules, although still not safe, is better than full in person. Plus, since you're in 6th, you can slack off all you want at home lol
I Make Your OC's! on 1/21/2021 11:03:45 PM
I’m struggling to decipher this. Perhaps that’s where the profundity lies...
hello? on 1/20/2021 9:39:16 AM
"I'm not sure what this is yet, but I'll try to keep at least the first parts of it short so the reader can get to making choices faster. It's in a more mature category now because I might include some violence, gore, or themes that people may be sensitive to."
Don't worry about cutting out story, it's the most important aspect of what you're writing, so don't hesitate to fill up pages with hundreds of words. We've got a community of readers!
hello? on 1/20/2021 8:30:11 AM
I find it ironic that you are the one who wrote this :P
hello? on 1/20/2021 8:19:33 AM
Welcome!
All the best wishes to you and your storygame!
IFDB Outpost on 1/18/2021 2:29:11 PM
There's 4 of those twine craps
400 free points plus the bonus helpfuls, and the 10 points you rate, and the helpful votes you cast.
Erotic Stories on 1/17/2021 7:30:05 PM
Though there is infinite story....
Link
Tread carefully
EDIT: Wonder if he'll ever come back to read this
Link
Tread carefully
EDIT: Wonder if he'll ever come back to read this