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Gay and Depressed in Prison

3rd place entry in Corgi's Gaybellion Contest

In this game, you play a very familiar character from the previous Gay and Depressed stories, who is now in jail. You used to be a side character in other people's stories, but now the spotlight is finally yours in this Gay and Depressed spin-off!

If you're interested in some more Gay and Depressed story games, check out the original by queenlatifah04, Gay Old Time by Darius_Conwright, Gay and DepressedER!!! by fresh_out_of_the_oven, and Gay and Depressed: The snow bunny society by Benholman44. All of the "gay and depressed" stories are stand-alone stories, so each one can be read separately, but I highly recommend you check these stories out!

Down by the river

unpublished

There's an old man called the Mississippi
That's the old man that I'd like to be!
What does he care if the world's got troubles?
What does he care if the land ain't free?

Ol' man river,
That old man river
He must know something
But don't say nothing
He just keeps rolling
He keeps rolling along"

-Oscar Hammerstein, "Old Man River"

In this story game, you play Samantha, a 25-year old engineer who's recently been through a rough breakup. Out of the blue, your grandfather asks you to accompany him on a river-boat journey where you two will traverse across a national treasure, our very own Mississippi River. Explore the natural beauty of this great waterway as you embark on a journey of self-discovery and finding love. Will you successfully find both on this wonderful river-boat adventure? Only one way to find out!

Falsely Accused:The Telenorian Kingdom's Worst Prison

unpublished

Submitted for Sherbet's Summer's End Synergy Contest.

In this game, you play as a thief. The princess has been kidnapped and everyone suspected that the big fat evil dragon kidnapped her. Naturally, since you and your crew are the dragon's known associates, you are put in the jail. But here's the thing, you're innocent. From the moment you're in jail, it's been one nightmare after another. Far from administering the justice, the Telenorian Prison is nothing but exploitative and conniving. Will you be able to survive and point the finger back on those that did you wrong, or will you succumb to the darkness in jail without getting the chance to vindicate yourself. Warning: This game can be emotionally disturbing and contains dark themes with many parallels to real life. Proceed at your own risk.

That's so nice of you! I'd love to get a picture! Could you draw medieval Spiderman? So he's probably going to be wearing a cloak and have sword belt, and his mask would probably be more of a medieval style hood. Alternatively, you could also go the knight in shining armor route since it's medieval. There's so many directions to choose from. That would be super cool! Let me know if that is too challenging. And thanks again for offering, it's really cool of you.

Oh yeah, my bad. It was unpublished not deleted.

Neddy, as it stands, your story will probably be deleted because it simply doesn't meet site standards. This isn't a reflection on you, it's just that the site is for readers as much as it is for writers, so naturally stories are curated so they meet a certain level of minimum quality. But you can fix it quite easily! Ideally, try to write at least 100-300 words per page, and have a story in mind. You can write way more than that, but this is a good number to shoot for, at least for now. For instance, your first sentence is "It was a bright Saturday morning as your alarm clock Ring at 4:00 in the morning." Try adding more to that. Maybe describe the person's room, what's going on, what the setting is, why they chose to wake up so early. Tell us more about this character, it doesn't have to be too long, but it just has to be enough where you make me want to keep reading. If you do that for all your pages, and add more choices, then I'm sure your story will be very good. I'd also like to see more in terms of character motivations. For instance, why the protagonist likes Hendrix, or why she chooses the specific outfits she wears in school. Stuff like that. Make it a little more immersive, and then you'll be good.

I'm not an admin but your story is on sneak peek mode so anyone can check it. I'd be happy to!

Now we're getting somewhere! What's the pattern?

hey man, Usually when starting discussion threads it's a good idea to have a specific topic in mind before you post. There's nothing to really talk about here, because I don't know what "thing about birthdates" you're talking about. What is the thing about birthdates?

Woah. This is really interesting data. How long did it take to click through everyone's profiles?

When you click to play a story, in the top right corner you'll see a menu of options and one of those options is an orange square labelled "rate and comment". click on that button, it'll take you to a page where you can rate the story.

Don’t forget to rate and comment on the story! You can rate stories out of 8, and it helps when people rate stories If you want another story like Breaker, check out Spell of slumber by the same author Spell of slumber is a sleeping beauty fan fiction that everybody says is really good! Definetly read that one

Yes I do

Breaker by Mystic_Warrior. https://chooseyourstory.com/story/breaker

Altair-III: Search and Rescue by JohnX https://chooseyourstory.com/story/altair~2diii-~3a-search-and-rescue

Mission Sunshine by MadHattersDaughter https://chooseyourstory.com/story/mission-sunshine

Stack of Cats by Mizal https://chooseyourstory.com/story/a-stack-of-cats

Yet another world ending scenario by fresh_out_the_oven https://chooseyourstory.com/story/yet-another-world~2dending-scenario

I would feel comfortable recommending any of these stories to 10 year olds and up.