7/30/2024

11/28/2025 12:04 PM

1112

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1511 wins / 1485 losses

Marauder

Gay and Depressed in Prison

3rd place entry in Corgi's Gaybellion Contest

In this game, you play a very familiar character from the previous Gay and Depressed stories, who is now in jail. You used to be a side character in other people's stories, but now the spotlight is finally yours in this Gay and Depressed spin-off!

If you're interested in some more Gay and Depressed story games, check out the original by queenlatifah04, Gay Old Time by Darius_Conwright, Gay and DepressedER!!! by fresh_out_of_the_oven, and Gay and Depressed: The snow bunny society by Benholman44. All of the "gay and depressed" stories are stand-alone stories, so each one can be read separately, but I highly recommend you check these stories out!

Thanks Anthraxus! Glad I was able to surprise you.

Thanks Clay! I really appreciate that.

Happy thanksgiving Suranna, Feelings are never cheesy cornball shit. Thank you for having the courage to start this. I am really thankful for CYS, this place has really been a beacon of hope and light in my life. I guess you need to become the masters of grim dark in order to truly understand and appreciate the light. Love you guys and I hope everyone is having a wonderful thanksgiving with family

You can still join Cat! You would just need someone else who hasn’t joined to join as well to balance it out. I’m sure someone will join, let’s ask Anyone who hasn’t already joined interested?

Cavus, I got to say yours was awesome! I am really incredibly blessed to have the chance to go against you, you wrote a really cool story. Your story touched at the heart of many ideas I talked about with my dad. The first half of your story glorifies the revolutionaries, shows them through the eyes of Jack, a naive 19 year old boy who only sees them as heroes. I loved the way the story turns on our expectation in the 2nd half, and shows us the dark side of dogmatic revolutionary ideals. Your story encapsulated some pretty persistent themes that continually recur through history, with movements that start out with the best intentions, and then over time, lose that sincerity that made them great. And the young revolutionaries, who are taken in by promises of freedom, pay the price. Of course, it's not always so black and white, but there's 2 sides of the coin, and I'm glad that your story focuses on the less-talked about aspect of revolution, that conveniently gets ignored in many movies and TV shows.

I feel like screwing up a story about rats in front of Enter should be a crime lol. I apologize, and I do think a riot of rats is a wonderful topic that deserves a better writer to breathe life into it. Anyone want to write a rat riot story? I guess if anyone who has writer's block is reading this, then here's a cool idea. Post your own spin on this idea, I feel like rats are very interesting creatures, and there's so much you can do with it. Hopefully, this idea will find its home in an even better story than mine! Enter was spot on when he said I put the riot in a bit late. I really need to work on pacing, and making it even more exciting and scary.

Thank you for reminding me Avo!

He did! I saw it and I'm really proud of you! Honestly, take the W! You should feel really good about it, enter's a notoriously tough judge, so if he gave your story a higher score than mine, that means you really improved since you faced off against blister. So proud of you! Can't wait to see how you do in future thunder domes.

When starting out and still a new writer, none of us have any idea what we're doing! That's the beauty of writing. You have a cool idea in your head, tantalizing story scenes, a badass main character, and plot twists galore, but in order for the reader to see everything that's in your head, you have to write it down! My first story on the site, which was a super cool(although in my eyes only lol) prison story set in a fantasy setting, had giant blocks of text, unnecessary lore dumping and ended right as it got interesting. Based on the feedback from the comments, I know not to do that now, and my writing has gotten better since! And no doubt, the same will happen with my next story, and I'll keep revising and getting better. Like karate, cooking, fencing, coding, or any other worthwhile endeavor, you get better at writing the more of it you do! The more you fail, the more you dust yourself off and try again. So don't trash it. Keep learning.

Warchimp is awesome. NinaAndZane, You're going to need to have Warchimp and Cybermonkey read, both are super crazy cyberpunk monkey hi-jinks stories. Warchimp is more epic-fantasy in tone than Cybermonkey, which is more of a fast paced action thriller, but both are amazing in their own way.