7/30/2024

11/25/2025 4:44 PM

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1511 wins / 1485 losses

Marauder

Gay and Depressed in Prison

3rd place entry in Corgi's Gaybellion Contest

In this game, you play a very familiar character from the previous Gay and Depressed stories, who is now in jail. You used to be a side character in other people's stories, but now the spotlight is finally yours in this Gay and Depressed spin-off!

If you're interested in some more Gay and Depressed story games, check out the original by queenlatifah04, Gay Old Time by Darius_Conwright, Gay and DepressedER!!! by fresh_out_of_the_oven, and Gay and Depressed: The snow bunny society by Benholman44. All of the "gay and depressed" stories are stand-alone stories, so each one can be read separately, but I highly recommend you check these stories out!

When starting out and still a new writer, none of us have any idea what we're doing! That's the beauty of writing. You have a cool idea in your head, tantalizing story scenes, a badass main character, and plot twists galore, but in order for the reader to see everything that's in your head, you have to write it down! My first story on the site, which was a super cool(although in my eyes only lol) prison story set in a fantasy setting, had giant blocks of text, unnecessary lore dumping and ended right as it got interesting. Based on the feedback from the comments, I know not to do that now, and my writing has gotten better since! And no doubt, the same will happen with my next story, and I'll keep revising and getting better. Like karate, cooking, fencing, coding, or any other worthwhile endeavor, you get better at writing the more of it you do! The more you fail, the more you dust yourself off and try again. So don't trash it. Keep learning.

Warchimp is awesome. NinaAndZane, You're going to need to have Warchimp and Cybermonkey read, both are super crazy cyberpunk monkey hi-jinks stories. Warchimp is more epic-fantasy in tone than Cybermonkey, which is more of a fast paced action thriller, but both are amazing in their own way.

Don't say that! You must have ideas percolating around your brain, that's why you joined the site after all! Where's your cool-looking profile picture from? If you liked that show or movie, you can try writing a fan fiction story about it. And I bet you have original ideas. So work on those too! If you're stuck or can't think of anything, use writing prompts. We actually have a writing contest every year, so you can join and pick a prompt that you enjoy. Then write. You got this! Oh, and welcome back!

Thank you so much for voting stories_unwritten! I will read your feedback later tonight, and I really appreciate this. It's really cool of you! Can't wait to see what stories you're going to write!

Hey Beefhotpot, You're doing an awesome job. 500-1000 words per hour is expected, especially when writing a historical piece. It's a good pace. You're trying to feel the thoughts and feelings of people from more than 70 years ago, and write action in a way that respects the historical events, so it's going to be a difficult task at times. But the fact that you're spending so much time on each word means that you're writing it in a very deliberate and thoughtful way. So don't feel like you're doing something wrong or that you're going too slow. Your pace is just right. Keep going! You got this!

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Oh, that was a really funny story. So, it wasn't actually planned. Mystic came at this planning to just assign one gift to each person, but then someone mysteriously started gifting every one, and Mystic revealed that one of the participants decided to make a 50 point reward for whoever guessed who the secret "ninja" was. It later turned out to be Ben, and we all had a grand time trying to figure out who it was. Who knows, maybe there's a secret ninja in our midst who will do it again this year.

I'd like to join. The gif is so cool Mystic! I wonder if Ben or someone else is going to do the Santa ninja thing again, that was so fun last year!

That's a good goal to have. What are you writing about, Wildblue? Should be interesting! I'm looking forward to reading your game.