Player Comments on An old face

The concept of the game was good. However, there were a variety of spelling and grammar errors. There needs to be more of a plot line as well.
I was shot by the warden just for sitting in the wrong chair? Either the warden is a deranged psychopath who wasn't thoroughly examined for mental health problems, or I missed something in the story.
A reasonable first attempt at a CYOA, but more description and accuracy is needed.