Player Comments on Dream Forest note to self don't republish this

This story was interesting. It didn't have a great start, but about midway through it started to get good. Unfortunately, it ended not too long after it started feeling like the story was going somewhere. Another gripe I had was there was quite a few one choice pages. I understand that this was probably do to time constraints but its just something that tends to bug me a bit in CYOA stories. Overall, it had a lot of potential but it seemed to stop before things really got started. It did have an interesting ending however. Nice work.

This one seems a bit rudderless at first, but once you finally get knocked out it starts resembling a more standard story. There isn't much description of the environment or world exploration by the character, but it has nice reversal of what I assume is the standard expectation of main character perspective.

The highlight is probably the symmetry between the realms in this story. My ending was the one where you meet your dream.

It's an interesting concept, but I feel like a lot of story was left in the ether here.

One thing I'm curious about... what is "obviously styled" hair?