Player Comments on Friendship Forever

It was ok, it was really cute

This is so wholesome and sweet I wanted to like it more, but being rushed out with a bunch of errors and the lack of any real choices hurt what otherwise could've been a nice children's game.

Please proofread your work next time, there's no deadline for releasing these and no reason to miss so many errors with punctuation, grammar etc (and at one point Claire's name change's to Laura...) with a story this short.

More choices, and by that I mean choices that actually change the story would improve the experience too as well as adding some much needed content. At barely 1200 words this is pretty sparse. You click through five linear pages at the start and the few options you do have later are all cosmetic. The description says 'Explore this game' but there's not really much to it.

I think you really do have potential though and future stories could do well if you just put a little more attention into cleaning them up.