Player Comments on Get Rachel Home Safe

Potential, yet poor use of choices. Liked the way you write, and build your story.

Sadly since it´s quite linear, i can´t give it more than a 2/8.

I found it rather unsatisfying to actually get Rachel home safe. Also, you called her Ashley at one point.

Well, your writing is not too bad, but you need a better storyline with some real choices.

Very insightful! Women are always taught not to get in a car with strange men because they might try to rape them or something, but it's good see a story that teaches men not to pick up strange girls because they might try to... Rape their wives apparently. Drunk women do that all the time, right? :p

This was... interesting?