Player Comments on Harbinger
Finally got the second ending (no spoilers here). I enjoyed the short story of a Harbinger. I liked the "day-in-the-life-of" feel to it.
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LuvLee
on 11/4/2018 8:52:37 AM with a score of 0
There aren't two epilogues, there's only one.
This was very short and had a bunch of problems:
1) As mentioned, it was extremely short and linear.
2) There were some grammatical errors.
3) The scientist is a Harbinger in path 1 and a Harbinger-hating human in path 2.
4) During the fight your options are "4c" and "1a", how can the reader understand what these acronyms will lead to?
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undr
on 11/4/2018 6:38:33 AM with a score of 0
Really short and only found one epilogue, altough the writing is good and there aren't Any major errors.
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— Beta Tester on 11/1/2018 8:01:54 PM with a score of 0
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