Player Comments on Hello Mr Soto > ChooseYourStory.com

This was literally made by a 10-year-old who cusses to much. No matter what you do you just keep clicking on links and you either die for taking the dumbells from a guy who then proceeds to beat you, kill yourself for smoking with a chick (which I want to do), kill yourself for not being able to escape jail, die for getting to ripped, or of course the classic house-on-fire-mom-dead-dog-raped-note-in-the-driveway ending. There is only one path and if you choose something else, then you have to still go the other way. Her are some examples from the story of that: 1) You go to Subway for lunch and this kid cuts you in line so you can either beat him up or don't beat him up, but if you don't beat him up you still have to beat him up! 2) You either go to school or go back to sleep and if you go back to sleep you still have to go to school! 3) It tells you to go to lunch and ou could either pick Subway or... Pussy... If you choose pussy (I did choose pussy. I know, I know that's fucked up) then you still have to go to Subway! 4)If you choose to smoke then choose that you don't want to you still smoke! This game has pornographic content, cussing throughout, and no story whatsoever, and there is only one path. Hello Mr Soto (There should be a period right after the Mr) gets a piel of shit out of 8 (1/8).

— 11302 on 7/9/2014 4:05:28 AM with a score of 0

I waste my life on this sht

— RabbitSeason on 4/4/2014 9:54:03 AM with a score of 0

Somebody has too much time on their hands.

— Allusional on 4/3/2014 12:24:55 PM with a score of 0

This just another pathetic abomination of a story building itself upon a foundation of fake ratings and trolls with too much time on there hands. The grammar mixed in with the unnecessary profanity, leads me to believe that the author is some little kid who spends all of his/her time on Call of Duty.

Speaking of grammar, learn to spell. How the author misspells "fuck" is amazing. Let me say that if you despise poor grammar, you will look at this story and begin tearing your hair out. There is no real story, choices, or satisfaction to be found here. So now I shall give this story a REAL rating of 1/8.

Don't waste your time. You'd have a much better time watching your nails grow vs having your brain cells kill themselves reading this. Stay away...far, far, away.