Player Comments on Into the Woods Its Time To Go
1/8
Short.
Character Development=0
Bad Writing
Boring Story
And I could keep going... Next time try writing something not under 2 hours
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Ronhil12
on 11/27/2015 6:12:47 AM with a score of 0
I feel like this was just a 'testing the waters' game. It didn't have complex game play or plot. I take it was made quickly.
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bilbo
on 11/23/2015 10:29:07 PM with a score of 0
I think the story it's self had a good plot, but the plot was not built up enough. The story should be more detailed. Detail is very important but I did not see very much of it. The story it's self is to short. You could have made much longer. If this story was a bit longer and had more details, it would probably be perfect. Keep writing, and please take my comments as advise.(If this comment offends you in any way please delete it immediately and know I am trying to help you not hurt you.) :) KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!
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— Tangyfriend3027 on 11/23/2015 2:23:57 PM with a score of 0
Too short. This story was rushed. I would like to see more of it. I felt like I was reading the same thing over and over again. Didn't like this story. 1/8
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trolol
on 11/23/2015 2:21:18 PM with a score of 0
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