Player Comments on just play its awsome

I just can't express how bad this is!

there's no choices. I mean, the story lists choices, but there's only one link per page. Except the first page, which links to itself.

I think you could have come up with a better name for the story.

atrocious spelling, horrible story, not enough choices.

That made no sense, I died in a drive by and then bought a car and lived happily ever after... how exactly, did I do that?