Player Comments on Kitties first day out

This really needs to be proofread.

This is a cute little tale of a kitten adventuring around the house. There isn't really a plot; it is more a slice of life. Everything is from the kitten's perspective, which can be fun for the reader that knows what is going on when the kitten does not.

Oddly, one gets inventory items at the end of the story, which doesn't make a lot of sense.

Though it is a very short game, there are a handful of different endings. It would be nice to see this developed into a larger adventure with more rooms in the house, where the kitten can actually use her acquired skills.

The title could use capitalized and should be a possessive, not a plural, but overall the game is written well.

You should go back and proofread this, or at least capitalize the title. But overall it was kinda cute I guess, but I would suggest making it a little longer if you want it to be actually enjoyable and develop a story.