Player Comments on Lord of the Flies StoryGame

game doesn't let me make out sloppy style with ralph 0/10

Lord of the Flies isn't fantasy, and this probably belongs in the fan fiction or Everything Else category.

The main point of a CYOA is that it's supposed to give you choices and options and alternate paths; forcing the player to immediately go back and choose the correct option before continuing kind of defeats the purpose.

But I suppose this would be fine if presented as a simple quiz on the events of the book. It would have been interesting reading a longer and more detailed CYOA with the possibility of better (or worse) outcomes than the ones in the book however.

Keep in mind for future school projects that you can simply put a story in sneak peek mode and share the link with your teacher or whoever else. If this one winds up unpublished that would be the way to go.