Player Comments on The Fields of War

Dead pages....*finger wags*, that is a no-no on this site.

I would advise at least putting in.placeholder endings. I didn't run into any straight up dead end links (at least so far) so this may not be technically breaking any rules, but 'This is a new page' followed by an.End game link isn't must better as far as the reading experience goes.

Otherwise, the writing here and the amount of work put in so far is impressive, and it's a shame this is unlikely to be finished.

(If you do ever complete it, please make a parlor room thread; unfortunately by putting the unfinished version up now you've marked it with today's publish date, so if taken down and added to some time from now it won't show up on the new storygame page when you republish.)