Player Comments on The real detective challenge story (pm)
I thought was gonna do some real deductions, but instead i got to read an incomplete story, with no choices like they promised, and all that story build up just to say "that's the end!" I was expecting more.
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— Violet Johnson on 11/19/2015 4:58:45 PM with a score of 0
Interesting idea
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Skysworne
on 7/18/2013 12:18:37 PM with a score of 0
The facts are all checked and all logical. This is a detective story and not every person here is "clean"
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liuxess
on 7/15/2013 4:40:23 AM with a score of 0
its hard not to give a low rating,i cant count the number of times you stated the obvious, and how does a plumber make enough to live in a big house? if you want to get better you have to welcome the critique of other storygamers, hurtful or not.
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zeke86198
on 7/13/2013 9:32:24 AM with a score of 0
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