Player Comments on The Woman in White
This is good! The writing, setting and characters make the most out of the word and time constraint. I don’t mind how the reader is thrust into it all (which tends to happen with these things.)
I think the choice of murder plot may have been a smidge cliche as well as the execution of it. Cool twists or more diving into the characters could benefit a longer story.
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MadHattersDaughter
on 3/2/2026 11:34:55 AM with a score of 0
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