Player Comments on Treasure Adventure

Some of the story doesn't make sense. If those areas were to be fixed, I would definitely give it a higher rating.

— Quorrah on 2/26/2017 4:13:13 PM with a score of 0

I applaud you on the description of the story. It was interesting the way you displayed the choices, and I think would be good for organizational purpose. The thing that really agitated me was the fact the story and plot was kinda plain. The pirates, the cruise, the dolphins, they all were not written out to their full potential. What I mean is that you should have just wrote more about it. Some choices made little sense, and I feel they should have had more purpose.

— Zulutrader on 12/14/2016 9:19:42 AM with a score of 0

*Yawn* Hmm what

— AthenaT on 4/23/2015 9:26:46 PM with a score of 0

It's okay but there are pages which link incorrectly so the story doesn't always make sense

— Jordi P on 9/26/2014 12:37:55 PM with a score of 0

Its okay but a little short and not many choice.

— ChibiChu on 8/10/2014 4:22:57 AM with a score of 0

...interesting...

— goalie great on 4/22/2014 10:11:55 AM with a score of 0

You know, the cool thing with the story editor is that you don't have to write, "If this, go to page 4, ELSE page 5" etc. It gets kinda annoying.

— Tanstaafl on 10/8/2013 8:12:09 PM with a score of 0