Player Comments on Two Hours
Looks like the making of a decent puzzle game, but not much point in posting/reading it when it's incomplete.
And you'd better finish it quickly now that you've gone and posted it, or no one will see the complete version. That, or create a fresh game and copy everything over.
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Mizal
on 12/20/2016 9:17:03 PM with a score of 0
First, you spelled "resurrection" incorrectly. And as part of an item name, it can't be ignored.
Also, that was a bit... short. While there were many places to be "discover", the links to do so were made in such a way that it was harder to keep track of what I already clicked (aka, to many links on one page. Perhaps you could split it up into different sections of the room?).
I LOVED the idea of the story. It just hooked me immediately even though... I didn't know exactly what it was about. xD I mean, the description just got me, and it was well-written.
There weren't many options as to what you can DO. Yeah, there's a bunch of links and all, but you had to do something to get somewhere. The story still progressed the same way, I think (unless I missed something...).
You have good grammar and writing skills. Just make this a complete story (longer...) and it'd be very good! :D
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Crescentstar
on 12/20/2016 9:03:05 PM with a score of 0
Very interesting game.
Hoping to see more! ^_^
Don't publish demos, though.
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Seto
on 12/20/2016 8:39:29 PM with a score of 0
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