Player Comments on Volatile Times

Finish this! I give it 5/8.

Interesting, even if it's a demo. Your writing style is pleasing to my eyes, with no grammatical mistakes (unless you want an insomniac like me to actually focus).

I do find the choices a bit extreme atm, but maybe you'll open up more paths in due time...

Interesting concepts..... Can't wait fr finished product ;)

5/8 due to it's unfinished state, however;
I like the story and your style of writing, but there appears to be only one storyline and a lot of choices that will just get you killed. You may be planning to put in a separate story that branches off later in the story, I don't know, but either way, I'd like to see this finished. :) Keep up the good work.

Make more choices, and don't make one choice that leads ahead, the other to insta-death.

I'd have rated this a lot higher if it was actually FINISHED. For the last few pages there were no choices, and I was just clicking randomly...I know it's hard to wait, but most demos are never finished because most people simply do not have the patience to finish the storygame for which they've set up a wonderful beginning.

Please, finish this. 4/8.

Rather linear, not really a CYOA story. Good writing. I would prefer if you waited until you finished the entire story before publishing though.