L'appel telephonique
An
edutainment
storygame by
FJ42
Player Rating
1.49/8
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
Based on
12 ratings
since
Played times (finished )
Story Difficulty
2/8
"Walk in the park"
Play Length
2/8
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
Maturity Level
1/8
"Appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
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Class Project
Family Friendly
Foreign Language
Ton ami t'appelle un matin avant d'aller travailler. Pour aider a developper les habiletes sociales et la resolution de conflit (dans le contexte d'un conflit avec un ami/collegue de travail). Cette histoire a ete ecrite dans le contexte d'un stage d'intervention realise aupres de personnes ayant des difficultes sociales. Si tu as de bonnes capacites en resolution de conflit, il est possible que tu trouves l'histoire facile. L'histoire est ecrite en francais quebecois (les personnages sont Quebecois) et utilise des expressions, des termes, des mots et des contractions de la region. Cette histoire comporte une bonne fin et une mauvaise fin.
Player Comments
I think I get what the problem is with every story. They feel too much of a self help book which makes it so irky and weird to read!
With everything starting with a very mundane disagreement and it being resolved by the most obvious choice. And then the congratulations as if you solved the hardest puzzle known to mankind possible.
Oh, and just to say to you, these stories will probably get unpublished. It's sad to see that there's little feedback.
Eh, but next time, try to think of a story game more as a regular novel and try to structure it that way too. (Begginning-middle-end, character motivations and stuff) As of now it is a little barren of everything.
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Darius_Conwright
on 4/18/2024 11:42:28 PM with a score of 0
I resolved a conflict with my friend. I do not know why I did, I don't like that guy, anyway. He smells bad. I don't think he uses deodorant or something. And wow, have you ever smelled his breath? I'm pretty sure if he ever put toothpaste in his mouth, the toothpaste would melt. I mean, there's dragon breath and then there's this guy. I've seen him eat four pieces of mint gum and still wilt flowers by simply breathing on them. How does his breath smell that bad right after eating things? Does he make a stop in the bathroom every time and grab a snack out of the toilet? No, that would probably make his breath smell better if he did that. Seriously, though, no one wants to be his friend. I guess I'm his only friend, but I'm not happy about it.
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Ogre11
on 4/15/2024 10:00:19 PM with a score of 0
Les choix n'ont pas besoins d'être numérotés, il est possible de remplacer "choix n" par la réponse proposée, pour rendre la lecture plus aisée.
Le langage est correct et il n'y a pas ou peu de fautes.
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mazdark
on 4/14/2024 3:39:39 PM with a score of 0
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