Player Comments on a normal day...

I'm not going to bother fashioning a comment as you didn't bother fashioning even one coherent sentence.

One thing I liked about the story was how when you died, you went to hell rather then just ending the game. I thought that was something different. I don't know why you didn't put more detail in your rooms. One sentece rooms with no description makes it hard for a reader to get into. Your grammer was also horrible. Put more time and effort into your next story and you will have something nice.

Spelling/grammar wasn't that great. The story was okay but it should be more developed...

Spelling is bad and not so nice.....