JJJ-thebanisher, The Grandmaster of the Written Word
7/7/2015 12:34 AM
290 wins / 288 losses
I'm 3J, I've been around for awhile, shoot me any questions if you have them.
Disclaimer: I was about 12 years old when I wrote this. - 3J Play as Mattias, a young boy destined to do great things. Become King, befriend a samurai, get the Destiny sword, gather knights, make a friend in the form of a horse. If that wasn't enouph you also will fulfill a prophecy, meet a water nymph and greet a magician. All here in Mattias, THE one KNIGHT! UPDATES, PLEASE TAKE A LOOK V1. Completed, Many spelling errors. Please Forgive V2. Eased it up a little bit, changed two restrictions. V3. Changed Description, fixed a few spelling errors. V4. Fixed first of Mining village bugs. (Added link to steps) V5. Fixed the rest of the Mining village Bugs. (Took the price from 7000 down to 1400 and fixed some bad links) and Added some clues and another way to get the Destiny Sword. Thanx March I cant wait to be on the front page. V6. Added tons of pictires fixed some spelling errors and slightly edited the description. V7. A couple more spelling errors fixed, I think from Tidus3?
The ParaplaniacsOne in a million, Few Total.Power, Speed, Intelligence are key.They deliver the desperate hopeEliminate the Engineers of EvilAngels?The Groke don't think so.The Paraplaniacs are benevolent.Aren't they? Special Thanks madglee - TestingSethaniel - TestingAerostar - Came up with the name for the Grokes. First to listen to my idea for the Paraplaniacs.The Matrix & Jumper - Influences. Notes You can save only at Shrines.If you die, your link will be only a number, the higher the number the better you've done.If you find yourself with very few options, try going back to your last shrine and spending your experience differently. Choices in battle are affected by your abilities. A negative score, is a result of screwing all of the known universe. A positive score, is a result in success. Versions 1 - Published.
In a galaxy even further away from the last one, the sith have taken control of the inner thirty five planets and have destroyed the other ourty five hundred. All this in hope of keeping the galaxy entirely to themselves. The sith have fled from the last galaxy when Luke Skywalker destroyed them. Four endings. Author - JJJ-thebanisherIllustrators - Simpsons, somerandomperson (many thanks)Editors - Miccy2000, somerandompersonGame Tester: Somerandomperson, JJJ-thebanisher, Eddy, Canucks.Special thanks to - Alexp, MikeJ & Jedisplurge.com, also starwarss.com (Its meant to have the extra S) has been an amazing help. Any of the score totals could go over by a couple hundred. Best Ending - Saved the jedi monarch and converted the galaxy to a peaceful rule. Destroyed sith mothercruiser. (Will have around 62, 000 points.) Good Ending - Converted Galaxy to a peaceful rule. Destroyed Sith mothercruiser. (Will have around 21, 500) Mediocre Ending - Converted Galaxy to a peaceful rule. (will have around 13, 000 points) Bad Ending - Died or became incapacitated along the way. (Could have next to any amount, but probably not more then 5000, could not possibley be more then 11, 000) version 1 - Completed, edited and some pictures.
Blue versus red in a classic battle of good versus evil and right versus wrong. This is more story than game and a lot more story than anything I've written previously. There is one true ending (marked by a stirring legend), one other really good ending and there are at least two other legitimate endings. All legitimate endings include epilogues.
G(l)aile is a young man, living in the outskirts. His father is a wealthy merchant in Sanctum. He plans on setting out to see his father, but many things turn up and his adventure goes rotten. Hunt for your food, collect ten different weapons each with a generic set of uses in the game,complete difficult puzzles, defeat trolls, persuade orcs, complete quests, evade or hunt massive tribes of wandering cannibals, combat shadows, save your father, find out a long dead truth about your family and yourself and destroy the tower -- pillar of evil. All here in the Tower. Special Thanks madglee - Thank you for helping me with editing, providing support and testing. Actually you've tested my game a BAZILLION of times, and I thank you so much. Your pinpoint editing skills have come in more then handy. You rule dude. Actually you go beyond that, you just plain KICKASS!Exiled Phoenix - You really supported me and gave me great compliments that helped me keep going.Havacoman - No matter what are differences are, you kick ass at pictures.Weedy - Thanks for some of the item pictures man. Table of Contents -- Chapters The OutskirtsThe Road to SanctumThe City of SanctumThe Mountain passThe FringesOrc HighwayTroll CanyonCannibal CreekShadow TerritoryThe Tower. Tips and Hints Visit everything you can before leaving an area, always upgrade your statistics if you can. If you don't you may find yourself stuck. READ EVERYTHING. Also visit libraries for important tips on the game. Getting the most weapons as you can is essential as well. Endings There are three/four endings. One of them you don't get to leave comments on. Death - No commenting.Bad - Commenting (Score in the negatives)Medium - Commenting (Score in the positives)Good - Commenting (Score over 100 Grand) Do not say this in your comments PLEASE!!!! I realize that not every link displays a page number. This is because, previous page links, next chapter links, and links that have nothing to do with the story get nothing. DO NOT BASE YOUR COMMENTS ON THIS!!!! I also realize that its very possible to cheat in many parts of the game. Deal with it. Cheaters will be cheaters. I also also realize that sometimes when you die or win a battle, the events will be hazy. There are two reasons for this, one I cant reveal as it partains to the story. However battles in this game are not "hollywood-ised". Often people die without knowing what happened. Suddenly your laying there with blood pooling from your arteries and you have no idea what happened. That happens quite a bit in the game. Length The length in this game varies based on your difficulty level and your choices. It can be anywhere from a length six to a length eight. The JJJ Challenge If you either beat this game with the best ending I will send you (via e-mail) a formatted strategy guide of the tower including how to get the best possible score, in the making, secrets of the game, complete walk through, and most importantly G(l)ailes epilogue.
You will need the password from the end of the first "Tower" to play this game! (The one in invisible text between two brackets on the last page). Don't worry; if you forgot it and can prove you beat the game by having a comment of over 100,000 score, then I will tell you the password. What happened to Glaile post death? Can't give away much because it can ruin the Tower I! This will be the introduction to the land of Serennia. Think about it like the Hobbit to the Lord of The Rings. STORY: 0 - Arrive from Far Land (Everywhere) View http://www.myadventuregame.com/story/All_About_Serennia.aspx for more about the timeline. Special ThanksSir_Lancegalawain - Excellent support and quest writingmadglee - My most trusted advisor (And Goddam can he ever write :D Go mommy Go)Solostrike - ScriptingJava - Pics and Some proofreading (on mine because Lance's work is usually without error)October - Some Editing.DarthVader_13 - Testing.Commentors (fans) - Thank so much Authors Note I would have liked to keep Lance as co-author but his life became busy and he could not help me in the end. Thank you for writing the quests you did! You were my number one special thanks.
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Recent PostsNeo Commander - Army Ants (World Conquest!) on 7/7/2015 12:33:27 AM
When Berka runs games, he generally automates very little which means he does a lot of work.CYS Forum Game Tournament for XP! on 7/1/2015 7:07:20 AM
The rules for Monopoly are more than 2600 words long (http://richard_wilding.tripod.com/monorules.htm). The rules for NC are 1559 and BZ put a lot of work into writing them. I think it's ridiculous to write it off because 1600 words is too many for you to read.When do Storygame Contests happen? on 6/30/2015 8:29:53 PM
That's actually not legal.CYS Forum Game Tournament for XP! on 6/30/2015 8:24:06 PM
You're as logical as ever. It's really not much reading and the rules are simple. For a self-proclaimed genius, you're sure easily intimidated by having to read writing on a writing website.Neo Commander - Army Ants (World Conquest!) on 6/30/2015 8:21:29 PM
Just want to pop in and say that I'm honored that another one of my games has a 'neo' version. The last case (when October made Neo Continent) was an improvement over the original game so I'm hoping that carries over to here! Who knows, maybe sometime this summer I'll come up with something new :) Best of luck in the tournament, Commanders... you'll need it.Draw My Attention (The Attentioning) on 6/14/2015 1:12:49 PM
Done and points awarded.Draw My Attention (The Attentioning) on 6/13/2015 6:34:20 PM
Yeah. I think that if an author publishes a story where he admits that it's bad, then it's deliberately bad and could be unpublished regardless of rating, though obviously common sense applies.Draw My Attention (The Attentioning) on 6/13/2015 3:38:28 PM
@BerkaZerka If the storygame is self-referenced as terrible, I think it would meet bullet point 7 of the minimum site standards and therefore qualify for unpublishing. Thoughts?Draw My Attention (The Attentioning) on 6/13/2015 3:35:14 PM
My vote is for unpublishing all three. Sequels will have higher ratings because in general, the people playing it liked the first one. It's safe to say, that if they were first parts of the story and not sequels, there's a good chance they'd also meet the requirement for unpublishing.Better profile on 6/8/2015 5:52:48 PM