Player Comments on Bee Adventure

The dastardly fish was my undoing. Pretty nice game.

I was enjoying this up until my bee got eaten by...a fish. Yeah. It's pretty short and it wouldn't be too bad with some more exploration options thrown in.

Also, considering that almost every wrong choice ends up in death, it's ironic that using your sting - you know, the one thing which would definitely kill a bee - doesn't kill you in this game. Maybe it's an accidental parody. I don't know.

This really could 'bee' a better story if you out more effort into it.

Other than a section where you switch mid page from second to first person, I guess there's nothing too obviously wrong with this. It's just short. Really, really ridiculously short.

Some kind of plot beyond 'find flowers and try not to randomly die' would have made it more interesting, or since this is for school you could've focused more on realism and facts about actual bees. They're pretty cool insects in their own right.

BTW if you ever need to use the site for another school project and don't want to post your work for public scrutiny, you can leave it unpublished in your profile, turn on sneak peek, and just share the link with your teacher.