Player Comments on Captain

Depressing!

I'd rather have more content than better grammar

This was pretty bad, here's why:
- Poor Grammar.
- Linear Story (all choices but one always lead to death).
- 1-2 sentence pages.

Try again.

Horrible grammar, one sentence pages, limited vocabulary(which isn't what makes a game)and over all just bad.

Oh yeah, and the grammar was horrible. I can't believe that I left that off the last comment :P

Did you try to publish this before? I seem to remember a really bad civil war game in the past as well.

Anywho, back to the critique. You had the options, sure, but some of the first options were death options. It's never good to put death links in the first choice page. Also, it doesn't matter how many choices you have if the pages don't measure up. Try to make your pages more than one sentence long.