Player Comments on Dog Life
This story, well, it has a lot of options…that don’t really go anywhere. I can really appreciate the vast number of options. I really like that your first selection really sets the tone for the story and takes you down one of the three paths. However, beyond that, the story is so short that there’s not only not much of a story, but no real options beyond that.
There were still choices there, but often the choices simply led to one ending or another ending without any additional story in between. Indeed, because of the branching on the first page, each story ends up being shorter than a recipe. As others have pointed out, this is a neat idea. This is good concept for a story. The branching at the start is nice and takes the story in a good direction: but then suddenly there’s nothing. This could be a lot longer and more detailed and turned into quite an effective story if more time and care were taken with the story, I think.
on 7/7/2018 5:33:20 PM with a score of 0
Cute, but not very detailed. My advice: try to make your characters MEAN something, rather than just being there. Also try to add more options per page.
on 12/17/2019 10:02:35 AM with a score of 0
Got bitten by ants. Not surprising.
7/19, story didn't really go anywhere.
on 5/16/2019 10:26:00 AM with a score of 0
wuish it was longer but pretty good
-- kjbvkjlqcbo/ewbfbfhh on 6/21/2018 9:53:27 PM with a score of 0
This was a fun story!
on 6/5/2018 8:14:18 AM with a score of 0
It was really good, but too short.
on 5/21/2018 7:24:20 PM with a score of 0
It's a nice thought, but very short.
on 1/14/2018 3:57:52 PM with a score of 0
It was great! A little short...
on 9/3/2017 2:41:15 PM with a score of 0
It wasn't very long but it's ok and I rated it a 5 because it's good but maybe make it a bit longer next time as well as adding some more options
-- Bingers on 7/16/2017 10:45:35 PM with a score of 0
Aww.. This is cute
on 6/26/2017 1:38:07 PM with a score of 0
In my opinion I think it was fun. It was short but worth it to save my owner on option 3!
-- FF on 1/17/2017 9:44:34 AM with a score of 0
i love this i would love for you to put more options and pictures thank you
-- reese on 1/17/2017 9:37:25 AM with a score of 0
-- Salvador on 1/17/2017 9:36:02 AM with a score of 0
it was fun pretending to be a dog
-- kayla on 1/17/2017 9:35:12 AM with a score of 0
Some of it was very nice. However, the endings are unreasonable. I also noticed that some things don't couldn't know...overall a okay story.
on 11/2/2016 5:08:25 PM with a score of 0
I liked it It is short and sweet
on 7/14/2016 1:31:24 PM with a score of 0
Short. And on one of the new tabs it is called Feild but Feild is actually spelled Feild, don't worry, we all make mistakes.
on 6/3/2016 3:56:51 PM with a score of 0
It was ok but very short. It was cute. Since it was more like a baby game I gave it a not the best and not the worst.
on 3/8/2016 7:30:49 PM with a score of 0
but first....... SQUIRRAL
on 2/10/2016 7:10:49 PM with a score of 0
While not very expansive, I absolutely love it. It is very cute, and I see a lot of potential. 7/8.
on 10/22/2015 9:37:45 AM with a score of 0
This was extremely short with not enough detail and no real goal. Most storygames have some kind of goal. Also, you don't have much of a choice.
Stay away. Far, far away. 1/8.
on 10/6/2015 12:21:59 AM with a score of 0
It's really cute
on 9/10/2015 9:15:03 PM with a score of 0
on 7/31/2015 8:54:12 AM with a score of 0
Wow rlly fun!! :D I'm a golden retriever who caught 5 grasshoppers
on 7/18/2015 5:47:28 PM with a score of 0
I am a hero! A Cocker Spaniel with a medal! I would have preferred a treat.
-- Victoria on 5/31/2015 8:59:56 AM with a score of 0
I woulda got dat squirral...
-- Johndoe number9 on 5/23/2015 2:11:33 AM with a score of 0
its too short
-- warriorcatslover on 4/16/2015 9:38:38 PM with a score of 0
That was better than some games I've played and I got a good ending wow! I think that's my first good ending......ever.
on 4/7/2015 7:24:21 AM with a score of 0
Meh, when little kids see that the Elderly lady die, there gonna bawl there eyes out like the man. CHANGE MATURITY LEVEL TO 2!!!!!!!!!!!!
on 10/22/2014 10:56:41 PM with a score of 0
Aww I love the cocker spaniel one
on 9/1/2014 1:15:36 PM with a score of 0
Cute, but plotless.
on 7/27/2014 12:06:48 PM with a score of 0
FUN FUN FUN!!!!
-- CheetahPelt on 7/6/2014 2:17:45 PM with a score of 0
Cool asoume life saver Cootchi the Coker spanial!
-- CheetahPelt on 7/6/2014 2:07:18 PM with a score of 0
Nice Shitzu story! COCKER SPAINAL TIME!!!
-- CheetahPelt on 7/6/2014 2:05:33 PM with a score of 0
Nice concept, there's just not enough supportive backbone to the story to make it very meaningful.
on 6/29/2014 2:43:57 PM with a score of 0
Lots of choice's and a good amount of diversity
on 6/18/2014 2:03:43 PM with a score of 0
This is a great premise for a gamebook but it is simply way too short. The grammar is good but descriptions could be better.
on 6/15/2014 10:46:55 PM with a score of 0
It literally took 30 seconds.
on 5/7/2014 1:51:29 AM with a score of 0
on 4/27/2014 6:09:00 PM with a score of 0
It was a good story, in my opinion, a little short, definetly didn't take me a lunch break! Less than half a minute(but I read fast, so…) and maybe a little longer? I like the idea of choosing your breed. That part was semi-interesting(because what's fun about choosing a breed) but that's not your fault. All in all, great story!
on 4/27/2014 8:54:39 AM with a score of 0