bilbo, The Contributor

Member Since

4/4/2014

Last Activity

2/23/2018 2:07 AM

EXP Points

138

Post Count

134

Storygame Count

1

Duel Stats

5 wins / 2 losses

Order

Marauder

Commendations

0

Unfortunately my head is far too full, so stories will be forthcoming... Someday.

Drakilian

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points

Storygames

Full moon's night

This is literally a fairy thingamabob. For the Riddles and Puzzles contest entry

 

Honorable Mention: Riddles & Puzzles 2016


Damn, son
unpublished

I know what it is and that's what matters


Day is falling
unpublished

*Important* please note that the first page is a prologue and not the first page of the story. There is a character switch after the prologue.

There are fixed events in time. No matter the variables applied, sometimes there is only one outcome.

This is story is really all the same thing in different manifestations. It starts with the decision of a young man. This is my first story so pardon me as I try to get my bearings on how to write storygames! I've edited this in a way that hopefully makes it more clear, and thank you for all the suggestions given by those who read it the first time!

On a side note, did you know the police contact the first workable address that a dead person has in their possession at the time of death? 

 

 


Introspective
unpublished

The player is a young man on his deathbed who is pulled into his subconscious where his memories are displaced. In order to survive he must remember who he is. There are two ways to reach the 'best' answer (or at least the most knowledgeable) several average answers, and several bad.


Recent Posts

December Contest Results on 1/23/2018 11:28:15 PM

I know! I'm as surprised as you honestly.


December Contest Results on 1/23/2018 11:07:16 PM

Congratulations! 


Would this be annoying to read? on 12/7/2016 10:15:07 AM

Would you count the example bit I posted as smooth?


Would this be annoying to read? on 12/6/2016 11:13:02 PM

probably posted in forum since I got here a bit late, but its an idea I might expand one day.


Would this be annoying to read? on 12/6/2016 10:41:27 PM

For December contest I'm considering doing the whole thing in verse. Example:

 

In Dulenmoore where Ravens cry

a fearsome war was passing by

with the neighboring kingdom of Galensberg

who spat on peace of action and word.

Their first offense was beyond obscene,

for it was they who stole the queen.

 

One day as she sat beside the brook,

her eyes and thoughts trapped in a book,

Galensberg’s heir, the prince Leopold

Carried out the orders he had been told.

To snatch the queen, to make it known

The North lands would appease him, and them alone.

 

Would that get annoying to read after a while?


December Contest on 12/6/2016 10:11:58 PM

You guessed right, ballads are my jam.


December Contest on 12/6/2016 10:08:50 PM

God Damn, you had to do this during finals week!? 

*Sigh* put me down for 125 points.


October Co-Author Spooky Story Contest on 10/31/2016 12:16:06 AM

Well, at least I didn't get shamed.


October Co-Author Spooky Story Contest on 10/27/2016 8:47:58 PM

Im available to co-author and write if you need someone last minute. I write best under pressure so I can contribute a significant amount with three days to go:p


Dead Words on 9/18/2016 11:59:54 PM

The word 'thing' is usually good to avoid. 'Is' should be used intentionally since it makes the sentence passive. 'Groovy' is a bit dated. It's hard to know since words are mostly situational.