bilbo, The Contributor
Unfortunately my head is far too full, so stories will be forthcoming... Someday.
This is literally a fairy thingamabob. For the Riddles and Puzzles contest entry
Honorable Mention: Riddles & Puzzles 2016
I know what it is and that's what matters
*Important* please note that the first page is a prologue and not the first page of the story. There is a character switch after the prologue.
There are fixed events in time. No matter the variables applied, sometimes there is only one outcome.
This is story is really all the same thing in different manifestations. It starts with the decision of a young man. This is my first story so pardon me as I try to get my bearings on how to write storygames! I've edited this in a way that hopefully makes it more clear, and thank you for all the suggestions given by those who read it the first time!
On a side note, did you know the police contact the first workable address that a dead person has in their possession at the time of death?
The player is a young man on his deathbed who is pulled into his subconscious where his memories are displaced. In order to survive he must remember who he is. There are two ways to reach the 'best' answer (or at least the most knowledgeable) several average answers, and several bad.
Recent PostsI might as well be new on 9/13/2019 11:20:57 AM
I am shocked and offended! We defintely were active at the same time. I think we both participated in some contest thing? Maybe the one Quiller ran?
Nah, but you're chill. My fault for vanishing for a couple years.
How Did You Find CYS? on 9/13/2019 11:18:46 AM
Pretty sure it was the zombie survival game. I searched for a zombie survival quiz or something and it popped up in my searches. I skulked for a while then did a few writing contests. End of story (or one of the endings anyway).
In hindsight, my parents thought choose your story books were satanic so I never read any. I don't remember why, they thought most things were satanic at one point or another. But yeah, Iliked this site and didn't let them know I was on it.
I might as well be new on 9/11/2019 10:02:11 PM
Goddammit I thought I told Frodo to take care of Endmaster:)
Who knows maybe this time around I'll actually finish that story I planned out in detail for six months then didn't finish the actual writing for.
I might as well be new on 9/11/2019 9:48:37 PM
Been gone so long I hardly recognize the place. Gonna have to figure out what commendations are. Catch up on so many stories.
I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve. Even so, good to be back.
December Contest Results on 1/23/2018 11:28:15 PM
I know! I'm as surprised as you honestly.
December Contest Results on 1/23/2018 11:07:16 PM
Would this be annoying to read? on 12/7/2016 10:15:07 AM
Would you count the example bit I posted as smooth?
Would this be annoying to read? on 12/6/2016 11:13:02 PM
probably posted in forum since I got here a bit late, but its an idea I might expand one day.
Would this be annoying to read? on 12/6/2016 10:41:27 PM
For December contest I'm considering doing the whole thing in verse. Example:
In Dulenmoore where Ravens cry
a fearsome war was passing by
with the neighboring kingdom of Galensberg
who spat on peace of action and word.
Their first offense was beyond obscene,
for it was they who stole the queen.
One day as she sat beside the brook,
her eyes and thoughts trapped in a book,
Galensberg’s heir, the prince Leopold
Carried out the orders he had been told.
To snatch the queen, to make it known
The North lands would appease him, and them alone.
Would that get annoying to read after a while?
December Contest on 12/6/2016 10:11:58 PM
You guessed right, ballads are my jam.