bilbo, The Contributor
Unfortunately my head is far too full, so stories will be forthcoming... Someday.
This is literally a fairy thingamabob. For the Riddles and Puzzles contest entry
Honorable Mention: Riddles & Puzzles 2016
I know what it is and that's what matters
*Important* please note that the first page is a prologue and not the first page of the story. There is a character switch after the prologue.
There are fixed events in time. No matter the variables applied, sometimes there is only one outcome.
This is story is really all the same thing in different manifestations. It starts with the decision of a young man. This is my first story so pardon me as I try to get my bearings on how to write storygames! I've edited this in a way that hopefully makes it more clear, and thank you for all the suggestions given by those who read it the first time!
On a side note, did you know the police contact the first workable address that a dead person has in their possession at the time of death?
This is a throwaway game to help me get back in the swing of it
Recent PostsTally Ho, Epilogue on 12/12/2019 8:06:44 PM
My vote is 1) Effective, bold, hopefully means someone won't be banging on the wine cellar door.
Big ol' blocks of text on 12/11/2019 11:22:07 PM
At what point does a piece become too long (or dense I suppose) to be engaging for you guys? I'm working on something and each 'page' is coming out to far more paragraphs than I see on the average storygame here, but there aren't as many pages as something like Endmaster's games. Because of this, it's a lot of reading for few choices and I just wanted to see if it was even worth the writing before I churn out more pages, haha.
Tally Ho, Chapter Eight on 12/11/2019 9:18:20 PM
1) I suppose
Tally Ho, Chapter Eight on 12/10/2019 9:10:08 PM
1. Only way it will possibly work and then for them to get off poor Pennysworth's back.
Noob Census - Earn pointless points! on 12/5/2019 9:11:15 PM
Yay! Mediocrity! Now that I am one my next goal will to stop being one.
Noob Census - Earn pointless points! on 12/5/2019 7:45:12 PM
I mean, you made the post. If decimals don't count for the storygame rating qualification then I'll take some free pointless points:p
Tally Ho, Chapter Eight on 12/5/2019 7:25:15 PM
2, more important for rory this way
Tally Ho, Chapter Eight on 12/1/2019 7:40:45 PM
4) we're already riding high!
Tally Ho, Chapter Eight on 11/30/2019 9:16:36 PM
1) The only choice that doesn't openly say or heavily imply you've lost to her before.
Tally Ho, Chapter Eight on 11/28/2019 2:04:07 PM
1, it's not like it will make them more demoralized unless she responds with something