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The Ghost People
This is an entry in the December contest

Writing Prompt: "In 100,000 B.C.E., a boy from a Neanderthal tribe meets a homo sapien girl for the first time, changing the fate of their tribes for all time . . . for better or worse."

A Neanderthal boy is sent on a perilous mission to rescue kidnapped members of his tribe from the clutches of the evil Ghost People, whose magic far surpasses that of his own people.

Some quick info on the setting: It is generally believed that hominids lost their thick fur around 1.2 million years ago or so, give or take. However, for the sake of this story, Homo neanderthalensis will have thicker body hair than Homo sapiens (not bear-thick, but still thicker). There are two reasons I have chosen to do this: (1) They lived in the colder regions. (2) Homo neanderthalensis appears to have had primitive clothing compared to Homo sapiens; basically just fur capes, while Homo sapiens had more advanced stitching and more tightly tailored clothing (which kept them more warm). So I feel having neanderthals a little more hairy than Homo sapiens is a reasonable liberty for me to take in this story.

As for language and technology, both Homo sapiens and Homo neanderthalensis shared almost identical vocal anatomy where it matters. Despite neanderthals not having left behind nearly as much advanced artwork, they very likely had complex language just like Homo sapiens. As for fire technology, for the purpose of this story I am assuming that different hominid tribes were further advanced than others, irrespective of species. The neanderthal tribe the protagonist comes from has yet to master creation of fire.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy!

Wheeler & Brandt LLP

WARNING: There isn't much by way of blatantly graphic sex in this storygame, but there are plenty of deviant erotic situations, including some pretty rapey ones. If such scenarios disturb you, this storygame probably isn't for you.

At its core, this storygame is a tale of a screwed up BDSM relationship, which you cultivate as the ultimate "sub." The goal of this storygame is to get your boss to engage in as many "unprofessional" acts as possible, and to eventually sway him into falling for you, all without getting fired along the way. If you make the right decisions, the game escalates from event to event, bringing you closer and closer to a relationship with your boss. It's pretty linear, and you'll know for certain if you get the "winning" ending. Let's just say it will involve a leash and some public humiliation.

You work in a small law firm, performing both receptionist and data entry roles. Your job is thankless and tedious, but one thing keeps you coming back: your boss, Brandon Wheeler. Aloof and dispassionate, Wheeler exudes a muted but overwhelming power you find irresistible, and you are determined to tame that power, even if it costs you your career.

The Journey To The Afterlife
unpublished , coauthor

(This is my first story).You are policeman on your 54th mission
you got shot you went straight
into the emergency room but you
didn't made it now you have to go
to the Afterlife.(Have Fun)

(You need 100 points 3 endings hell heaven and unknown

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Killa's Spring Thing Contest! on 5/21/2018 9:38:04 AM
Well yeah, but I didn't think it'd take almost a month to learn what I needed to get what I was trying to get done, and that was with some major help from a few people. But there's still more than a week.

Killa's Spring Thing Contest! on 5/21/2018 8:50:19 AM
I'm doing more than just scripting for visual effects. I'm also using variables based on decisions which change dialogue and available pages to go to. Also I don't really see how your consequent follows your antecedent here.

But as I said, it's fine. It was just a request. I'll still try to get a completed story on time. And if not, I suppose I better not drop the soap in the pit of shame.

Killa's Spring Thing Contest! on 5/21/2018 8:14:26 AM
One could say the same thing about stories that have complex dice rolls and the like, couldn't they? Or usage of variables, and so on? Anyway, regardless of your personal opinion, I'll just have to find a way to cope and hope my scripting actually works without testing it each time.

Site Running Very Slowly on 5/21/2018 5:27:12 AM
This is killing me because I have to test scripting on every single page for what I'm trying to do. I can't just write it offsite because I'm not familiar enough with the scripting here to know for certain what I'm trying to do is going to work, or what it will look like.

Killa's Spring Thing Contest! on 5/21/2018 1:09:31 AM
I don't want to be the one to do this, but with this happening: Site Running Very Slowly I really would like to ask for an extension. Some have said, "Well, why are you stupidly writing on this site?" And my answer would be, look at the help threads I've made the last two months. My storygame is very dependent upon looking a certain way. I have to test every single page to make sure colors have reasonable contrast, to make sure the scripting works right, and so on. Granted, that's not a requirement to make a storygame here, but it's a creative aspect of this I really like.

So these site problems have really set me back. Sometimes it's like every ten minutes this thing goes down for an hour. Is it bitcoin mining? Is it just a server problem? I don't know, but it's hurting me, and I don't want to end up in the pit of shame because I tried to put an extra touch on my storygame and the site wasn't cooperating.

So, with all humility, I ask for an extension, Mr. Killa Robot.

Site Running Very Slowly on 5/21/2018 1:02:49 AM
Is someone stealing our power to bitcoin mine or something?

Killa's Spring Thing Contest! on 5/15/2018 3:24:06 AM
You mean like you delete their accounts if they don't win? What kind of meth is circling around here, lol.

Killa's Spring Thing Contest! on 5/15/2018 2:34:49 AM
What exactly happens if you don't finish? I don't quite understand this pit of shame thing, and service to the Dark Lord. What kind of "services" would I be expected to perform for you? (on you? :/ )

Site Running Very Slowly on 5/12/2018 2:53:20 AM
Me too. Last week really.

Removing Bullet Points from Deleted Links on 5/8/2018 7:32:23 AM
Just putting li {color: #fe7503;} in the global script solved it. Thanks again.

With this, I do believe I FINALLY have all the scripting I want in my game. Now I can finally work on writing it (lol). 2.7 of three acts to go, and about 3/4 of a month to do finish...