MrAce321, The Reader
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Escape triple shame
Done: 7/5/22
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You're a man out for blood until it finally goes too far and you attract the wrong kind of attention. Now with only three days left to live, your powers stripped and your sanity restored, it's time to find out if you can redeem yourself in the short time you have left. Or even if you can perhaps find a way out from under the guillotine hanging over your head.
Author's note:
This is a story for EndMaster's Prompt Contest 4.
The prompt was, "A story about redemption of past misdeeds. (As if it needs to be said, you can't redeem a pedo)"
There are a total of four epilogues, with one being a "true" ending. It's not said which is the true ending, but it should be fairly obvious. Every choice is a new branch. There is no rebranching or stats, just a classic cave of time story.
Comments are obviously the most treasured thing in the world, even if it's just a favorite part or just a list of why this is the worst story in the world.
This is a story about an artificer making his way through the world. Making choices who shape who he is and who he will become. With even his motives shifting based on his choices.
Authors Note:
This is an entry for EndMaster's prompt contest.
The prompt was, "This story’s protagonist is an artificer, magical blacksmith, or creator of magical weapons. You can translate this prompt to a sci-fi equivalent if you want."
I managed to make this story into a complete product with all the content I wanted in the time given, but I didn't have time to polish the prose much. Please leave any feedback you have. And just for fun make sure to include which of the nine epilogues you got or your favorite if you read multiple.
This story is about a paladin who is on a quest to investigate an unkown evil out west, joined by a lighthearted mercanary.
Authors note: This story was made in a few days for Corgi's Lords of the land 2 contest. Not really proud of it, but it is what it is. Please leave any feedback you have in the reviews because while I know time could've improved the prose, the plot seems to be lacking something that I'm not sure of.
A Tale of Freedom and Chains
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Crime PG story
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The Candy Man
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paper slingers but with kids selling candy in boarding school
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CYS Mafia: Troll Attack (Game 1) on 10/10/2025 8:25:10 PMWhat's interesting is I assumed the game was won by Day 3, even if Cel shot the wrong person and the trolls killed say Cavus, it'd be me and Will verses a troll. But that wasn't true at all. I also forgot that if they got lucky they could've sniped the mods, though we had Cavus to make sure that couldn't happen.
If we hadn't discovered the Liminal lie, I would've investigated Liminal, told Cel he was bad, and had him shoot. Then vote out malk or goodnight the next day, either way being fine in the end since we'd have the voting block of Cel, Will, and Me. If Liminal turned up good I might've had him shoot malk for the spammer troll thing, but if I had him shoot goodnight, then maybe we would've lost. I suspected him or goodnight were the last troll until Liminal outed himself as one, then after the spammer troll saved malk I thought they both were trolls. If Liminal hadn't outed himself, it's hard to say how it would've gone.
CYS Mafia: Troll Attack (Game 1) on 10/9/2025 6:48:18 PM
Well, looks like it's over. My investigation said Malk was innocent, but that means little if he's hacker troll. I'm mainly suspicious of him not only because of his circumstances yesterday, but also because Liminal tried to incriminate Goodnight to Cavus. Since we know for a fact Liminal was a troll, it'd be strange for him to try and cast suspicion on a fellow troll.
We can kill Malk today and if the game doesn't end we can kill goodnight tomorrow. Really we don't even need Cavus, if Goodnight is the troll tomorrow it'll still be 2v1, but I vote we bring him back anyway, he deserves that much after all he's done for us
CYS Mafia: Troll Attack (Game 1) on 10/4/2025 8:31:45 PM
I'll go ahead and go into Advanced Editor
Books With Female Protagonists on 10/4/2025 7:56:58 PM
That's by the same author, but here's a pdf of it.
https://yourbookshelf.net/wp-content/uploads/2023/09/Yourbookshelf-327-Mistborn-THE-FINAL-EMPIRE.pdf
You can download the pdf, and it will be viewable offline
Books With Female Protagonists on 10/3/2025 11:22:38 AM
Mistborn, Fantasy book with female protagonist. Decently action heavy.
CYS Mafia: Troll Attack (Game 1) on 10/2/2025 6:36:59 PM
I am fine with my vote as is under the condition no one changes their vote
CYS Mafia: Troll Attack (Game 1) on 10/1/2025 2:28:50 PM
I pull out a piece of paper from the pocket of my basketball shorts.
"Alright, I've written this poem to accurately convey my feelings and outlook on the situation."
"Eating meat is gay,
And being gay is a sin,
So let's kill this heathen rabbit eater,
So god will help us win :)"
I change my vote to vote to kill Malk.
CYS Mafia: Troll Attack (Game 1) on 10/1/2025 12:53:32 PM
I don't think we should vote anyone out today, and yeah, fuck it let's bring back that bunny girl. Seemed amusing enough. Can't bring back the other two, if the explosion was from a troll then one of them is definitely a troll, and if it was from the chaos mod, then well I assume the mod had good reason to see them dead.
CYS Mafia: Troll Attack (Game 1) on 9/28/2025 1:15:34 PM
I go to Reading Corner
Cluesyourstory! Hatter's Halloween Party on 9/27/2025 1:43:31 PM
I want to be Attorney Alabaster
