enterpride, The Wordsmith
A jolly old Dutchman who is on an important mission to write his second story.
A contest entry for Bucky's year's end contest: choose your own prompt II.
Play as Lord Robert, the baron of Rivellon, at the lowest point of his life. He's cheated on by his wife, betrayed by his liege and filled to the brim with a turmoil of conflicting emotions.
How does his life end?
An up and coming epic tale told about the incarnation of the first sentient artificial intelligence
Recent PostsA new story. on 1/8/2020 3:31:10 PM
A new story. on 1/8/2020 2:03:18 PM
Year's End Contest - Entry Discussion Thread on 1/5/2020 11:32:48 AM
Year's End Contest - Choose Your Own Prompt II on 1/3/2020 10:17:12 PM
Here's my entry.
A Treatise on Heartly Manners. -Enterpride on 1/2/2020 8:50:47 PM
I am sitting on a fat 31k words now with a multiple of completed branches. There are just the two branches remaining. It's the two that have bugged me for the last month, that I have procrastinated until the very end.
Well, the end is in a little more than a full day. So I guess I'll have to pull a Camelon tomorrow and finish them.
I hate deadlines.
A Treatise on Heartly Manners. -Enterpride on 12/30/2019 10:20:08 AM
Freetime got busier than I hoped. Still got one path completely finished with two more close to finishing. Then I'll see if I'll have the time to properly grow the last two branches, or if I have to cut them down to a stump dead end.
A knight, a princess, and a dragon. (Contest) on 12/20/2019 5:48:54 PM
"Well, I guess the charade is up, isn't it?" she says, softly sighing.
And you also get an awesome alliteration!
A Treatise on Heartly Manners. -Enterpride on 12/19/2019 4:16:34 PM
Week 3 update 1.
I didn't procrastinate enough and only managed to get to 18k words. At least there'll be some quiet days off ahead.
A Treatise on Heartly Manners. -Enterpride on 12/12/2019 6:36:16 PM
Thank you for your kind words and you're right. The second set of sentenced flow much better, I've fixed it.
Your prompt makes me remember that one time I so innocently read the Grimm's tales. My kid-mind was not ready for any of that.
A Treatise on Heartly Manners. -Enterpride on 12/12/2019 6:31:51 PM
Week two, update two. It's getting somewhere!
So I just went past 15k words over 42 pages. Sadly I couldn't finish any more branches or add more endings. What I did do, was adding to the romance part of the game, blasting toxic early Weeknd at full volume. Fun times.
Next week is going to be busy with exams. So I predict I'll go full speed ahead with the power of procrastination and add another 5000 by next update.
I'd also like to thank Reader82 for some much-needed proofreading and an astonishing amount of high-quality feedback. Thank you, man!