Player Comments on Earth Science

OK, I'm doing earth science in school and its even less boring than this.

Sorry if I sounded rude by the way, I just wanted to clarify what this website it about.

I understand if this is a school project, as was previously stated by someone I believe, but please understand. This is a very serious site in which writing is valued and honestly criticized. If you look at most any other game, you'll see that a lot of time and effort was put into it. In the future, should you post homework on here, please allow sneak peek instead and simply share that with your teacher. Thank you for your consideration.

All the endings kill you!You should feel ashamed.......

You should be ashamed for writing like this. My dog can stomp a pile of mud and a better story would come out of it, i'd bet.

All the endings kill you!

Horribly Horrible.

Also, don't comment on your own story. Your rating doesn't count, and everyone can see what you're doing. It's tacky.

How to get your free point: Click Convection. Don't bother with the others, you mostly just die and repeatedly loop back to the beginning.

To the author: This really isn't a story, has no meaningful choices and none that follow any kind of logic. The word 'Erosion' without context shouldn't really be expected to lead to a single line about being killed by a mudslide, and yet this sort of thing is basically the entire game.

Too many spelling errors for a game this microscopic, as well. There's literally the equivalent of, maybe one paragraph of text here. You should have noticed that you were misspelling words even as simple as 'forest'.

If you ever publish anything else here, please put more time and effort in. I realize this was a school project, but it's going to get judged by the same standards as any other story while it's here. It was your choice to publish it instead of using sneak peek and just sharing the link with your teacher.

This will be unpublished in a day or two for not meeting minimum site standards, just fyi. Don't republish it or you can expect it to just be deleted.