Plelb, The Reader

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11/3/2016

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4/23/2017 12:30 PM

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184

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27 wins / 38 losses

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Sore wa chigao yo! (No that's wrong!)

Hello there person that visited my tacky profile! My name is Plelb, but you can call me Plelb. I'm just this ordinary dude that doesn't really do much and tends to be such a slow writer that nothing gets finished. You're probably gonna get bored while reading this won't cha? Well, here are some random facts about me.

Favorite games: None. I prefer stories.

Currently watching: Soul Eater, Spongebob Squarehead, Your death noted, Sword Art Online, Your Mom.

Friends on this site: People and genderless robots

Current storygames I may or may not be working on because i'm really lazy: Wandering Souls
 

Whispers of Hell
You play as a not so ordinary fairy names Rayen. For some reason, she gets pulled into the underworld because her turf got invaded by beings. More details soon... 

Actually just check out my storygames below, i'm too lazy to write it down on this profile. 

OH WAIT!

I'll really be joining and completing the March contest this time. Especially since I'll be bettin' really high. I'll go find a rival for now so that I may be motivated.

Current Rivals: Mr/s. Minnie the King (MinnieKing), Banning Lord (BannerLord)

How to beat the rival based on past experience (MinnieKing): Hmm... this is a hard one. Minnie is quite a fast writer, basing it on quantity instead of quality. However, the problem is that  Minnie tends to start small and work his way up. A problem I need to beat. Also, he's quite good at distracting you. 

How to beat the rival based on past experience (BannerLord): Oh no! The Generic Banner has been making more banners to welcome the newbs of Cystia. I must beat him by welcoming all of the newbs before he gets there, because if I don't, I will die. That and the fact that I need to beat a banner maker due to the fact that I'm just a number. I wonder why many people in Cystia make their profile names similar to objects anyways...

 

Storygames

The Lights of Liberation
unpublished

Summary of the story:

Oh no! You need to pass your project about the expeditions made by people in Asia, America, Europe, and so much more. Of course, the deadline is after 2 days and you always do things at the eleventh hour. It looks like you have to read your history book for the assignment...

“History is always written by the winners. When two cultures clash, the loser is obliterated, and the winner writes the history books-books which glorify their own cause and disparage the conquered foe. As Napoleon once said, 'What is history, but a fable agreed upon?” - Dan Brown, The Da Vinci Code

There are numerous endings and paths depending on what you do for your essay and your choices as the explorers. Remember, You are able to completely rewrite history so the information in this edutainment isn't accurate. Could you achieve all the endings?

Extremely Important:

If you reach certain endings, you could play as some more explorers that isn't from Spain, Portugal, or Europe. Those explorers are simply added to your essays to get bonus points for your assignment. Do note that your choices can affect the life of those explorers.

Additional Notes:

This story is geared for kids around 10-13 years old despite it having a broad vocabulary. If you don't understand a word in this story, simply look it up on Google!

This story is a last minute entry for the January 2017 contest. I need to write about 200 pages per day if I want to make this work!


The Sinner's Nightmare
unpublished , coauthor

"I look around once again and observe my damned chamber. I twirl around like a ballerina and laugh. Oh, this is what feels like. To be truly free, one has to be imprisoned. A man cannot be tied to earthly desires. Nothing must pull him down. He has to love nothing but himself. I twirl round and round dancing to the beat of my heart. I laugh in my rasping voice. Soon, I grow dizzy and the walls revolve before my eyes.

I fall to the ground and graze my skin on the sharp rock. I close my eyes and listen to the laughter. I listen to the cries of pain. The sound is intoxicating. It is mesmerizing. One has not lived when he has not heard a man beg for his life.

I open my eyes again and I observe that the walls have changed. They have turned into steel and they are closing around me. The walls grow closer and closer. I open my arms and I smile. Death is coming. I long for it. But alas. It is not to be. I blink for a moment only to find that the walls have vanished before my eyes. Iron has replaced it. I am now in an iron cage. I am the iron beast. Man is a beast. No matter how much he hates to admit it, man is a beast!"

 

Man is flawed. Man is a monster. Man is madness. Man will pay for his crimes.

But, man must know, man must believe that in the midst of darkness and pain, there is always hope. There is always light.

 

Note: There are two paths in this story. The path of truth and the path of lies. There are several different endings in this tale. On second thought, scratch all that and just know this. This story is a little madness written by the madman in me?


Wandering Souls
unpublished

 Summary of the story:

You, the protagonist are suffering from your inner demons. Inner demons that often cause you harm and when intense, no emotions at all. Just because of the past, all your emotions have been put into the void, unable to break free. Your time has become weary, confusing, and pointless. There is absolutely no point in doing anything in your life as, for a hundred years, most people born today will die anyways. Most of the time, you just sit on your bed, wishing those inner demons would go away... but they don't... nor will they ever. If a miracle happens than it's a different story but... maybe they weren't supposed to, but maybe because such a 'miracle' doesn't exist. As the emptiness in your soul wraps around your body, just a lone thought in your mind arises. What if you're able to fully immerse yourself in the past and... through small deeds change yourself in the present. However, an opportunity to change the world presents itself to you, will you be taking this shot or will you miss?

Special Thanks To and Cameos:

MinnieKing - The author of numerous books, and only one is decent enough to be published.
StrykerL-
StillWatersRunDeep-

Additional notes:

Please do note that this is my first storygame that I plan to complete and finish so constructive criticism is really appreciated.

If you're stuck on the first page, click the title of the storygame on the top.

Images and GIFS in this story are 'borrowed' from Google than slightly altered to fit the needs of a CYOA about your inner demons.

The prologue and the first half of chapter one has lacking choices because of the fact that the theme, depression wraps around you just like vines. This shall be considered a cutscene.

Lastly, I would like to dedicate these to the people mentioned in the cameos.

WARNING: This story deals with some very dark matters such as Depression and OCD. This is a presentation of what would happen if this were to occur to you but be wary as this isn't completely accurate and some people aren't that lucky. If you are having any personality disorders or feel extreme sadness than play at your own risk.

Hold it! Before you are allowed to play, I would like to let you know that this is an entry for the Chaos Contest.

(Inspired by the anime, Mirai Nikki/Future Diary)


Recent Posts

Metahuman/ Supernatural powers on 4/12/2017 6:41:27 AM
I'd recommend checking the Sci-Fi and Fantasy section of the site, but I can recommend a series and a storygame. The Homo Perfectus series features superpowers, and is quite good if you're into sci-fi. I recommend you start at the first installation. It's made by a talented author and the whole series hooked me for a few days. Not sure if you're a kid, so have this story about The Avengers made by Briar_Rose.

Hello! I am new here. on 4/7/2017 7:42:02 AM

Members here are not as aggressive as you think, contrary to popular belief. Just lurk about, and don't act like an illiterate child, unable to punctuate or use the shift key.

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Anyways, here's some text:

Hello and welcome to Cystia! Good luck on your writing and future endeavors. Here, have a few inspirational stories!

If you have any questions about this site, feel free to PM me, or any other member for help. This might be obvious, but never give out personal information, or your password to anyone on this site. It would also be a good idea to take a glance at the Help & Info section of the forums, particularly in the awesome articles made by other site members! This is a good starter article, as it displays numerous helpful information at this site, and can be counted as an archive.

Before you go on submerge yourself further in the reading or writing world, you must read this article that shows proper forum etiquette. I highly advise you do this to avoid potential fights. Remember, do not feed the troll!

Lastly, have this beautiful face to 'inspire' you.

Thomas The Train

Writing Prompts Week #13 on 4/4/2017 9:10:13 AM

Before I enter, I would like to say that there's just a tiny error on the list of tagged participants. I think autocorrect has something to do with that, Seto.


Hi Im new here on 4/3/2017 8:46:57 AM

Hello and welcome to Cystia! I'm not sure why you have a similar post to that other dude, and you're most likely an alt, but here's some text:

Hello and welcome to Cystia! Good luck on your writing and future endeavors. Here, have a few inspirational stories!

If you have any questions about this site, feel free to PM me, or any other member for help. This might be obvious, but never give out personal information, or your password to anyone on this site. It would also be a good idea to take a glance at the Help & Info section of the forums, particularly in the awesome articles made by other site members! This is a good starter article, as it displays numerous helpful information at this site, and can be counted as an archive.

Before you go on submerge yourself further in the reading or writing world, you must read this article that shows proper forum etiquette. I highly advise you do this to avoid potential fights. Remember, do not feed the troll!

Lastly, have this beautiful face to 'inspire' you.

Thomas The Train

Cystia's Red Band (RimWorld Play-through) on 4/3/2017 8:37:29 AM

This would seem interesting, but why won't you use some sort of recorder to record it? It might be a hassle, but it would certainly be interesting! I wouldn't even mind if you used a recorder that leaves watermarks such as Bandicam...

Also, can I use this idea? I need more content on my empty youtube channel and if I pick the right game, I could get ideas for my chaotic entry.


[Forum] Age limit on new users on 4/1/2017 11:20:02 PM
Who knows? The only person that qualifies this is BetaBand, but I don't even know what he did back then. There are possibly some people that are still kids, but prefer to hide their ages so we won't really know.

Music Stuff on 4/1/2017 11:36:41 AM

I'm not sure how to criticize music, so I'll just have to say what I feel about it.

The intro definitely sounds like a lullaby, and calms me just a bit. Nice use of chimes, or whatever sound you used in the creation of this lullaby. I think it's from 00:00 to 00:20, after that the notes start to 'overlap' and goes off-beat. This stops at around 00:53, and becomes relaxing again.

The middle, particularly the part with high sound (waves?) took me by surprise. It honestly doesn't fit a lullaby, and woke me up a little bit inside (no pun intended). Once 1:50 started, I heard someone mashing the piano. It doesn't provide a good transition to the soft, and peaceful lullaby feeling.

The end is quite nice, but is a little too quiet even for a lullalby. I supposed it's a good change of pace.

Maybe this music video could help out in your future music making:

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[Forum] Age limit on new users on 4/1/2017 11:09:50 AM

Despite the fact that I really hate annoying children, there's some of those really rare cases where children contribute something good on this site. Minimum age requirements feel really useless, as like you have said, you can lie about your age and birthyear. One can claim to be 0 years old as of this moment, which leads to some interesting messages from Cysid on your 'birthday'.

As for the e-mail confirmation, it might be hard to actually implement. Although it could make a good security measure for CYStia to prevent hurt kids or spam bots from spamming the forums.

Stryker has proposed a captcha system for robots and spammers, and it might actually be better and easier to implement. That said, it's annoying for posts so those simple button captchas should work for posts only whilst the account creation should have those check for street signs, stores signs, etc.


hi!!! im new! on 4/1/2017 9:52:50 AM

Children shouldn't even be on the internet, or on some parts of the Internet. This was proven by an 'intelligent' child that rarely gets upset. At least you still admitted to your mistakes. 

E: Your brother also annoyed me a ton. TL:DR; Children that aren't able to comprehend or write properly shouldn't be on Cystia!


hi!!! im new! on 4/1/2017 9:30:20 AM

Also, his post seems really suspicious...

hi! my name is superkid and i am new my brothr brot me to the site i want too sey hi!!!! :)