Player Comments on Ellis Island: Adventure as an Immigrant
this is something i did not understand
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— Alexander Chavez on 4/11/2019 11:50:36 AM with a score of 0
Whas fun really great nothing like it its like life you should make more
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— Christopher on 4/11/2019 11:11:22 AM with a score of 0
america is a good place to be
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— cj on 4/8/2019 10:12:48 AM with a score of 0
this was good and fun to do
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— diamond on 4/8/2019 9:55:56 AM with a score of 0
It was good and it was a little hard for me but I made it through.
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— Ivette Godinez on 4/9/2018 9:38:21 AM with a score of 0
There was a broken link:( And it was more of a choose your life/check the boxes than an actual story. The story seed seems interesting though.
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— Morganis on 9/11/2016 3:32:12 PM with a score of 0
Not sure how much of that was accurate but interesting none the less.
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BigRonn77
on 8/31/2016 11:42:42 AM with a score of 0
Lame.
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— Kate on 7/23/2016 3:29:42 PM with a score of 0
If the story would have covered the struggles immigrants faced while trying to fit into American society, then some emotion and a bigger storyline could have evolved. Good idea, just not executed very well. If this was executed differently, it would have been really good.
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— Visitor on 4/18/2016 9:47:41 PM with a score of 0
I like it but it could of been longer eh
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trolol
on 12/16/2015 5:55:05 PM with a score of 0
I like this
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— jeada on 12/15/2015 5:37:27 PM with a score of 0
Wonderful piece leandre
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— Michael Amo-Adu III on 12/15/2015 5:33:12 PM with a score of 0
u are a boss goooood jub leandre i need the link send me this
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— jahzeel on 12/15/2015 1:00:47 PM with a score of 0
Cam- I really enjoyed this this piece, the informativeness was well written and thoughtful :)
kyle- great
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— Cameron and Kyle on 12/15/2015 12:57:10 PM with a score of 0
This to me was very inspiring about immigration
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— Gabriel Garcia on 12/15/2015 12:30:02 PM with a score of 0
This is a great way to represent immigration.Imigration is very bad
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— Natalina Rainford on 12/15/2015 10:43:54 AM with a score of 0
There is a few bits wrong with the story.
There wasn't many choices.
But if it was executed well, I'm pretty it would have succeeded.
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Shadowulf
on 12/15/2015 9:08:39 AM with a score of 0
Has too many problems to be a good game.
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AntoniusTheCreator
on 12/12/2015 7:42:10 AM with a score of 0
"mexican money" xD you mean pesos? could've easily looked that up
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Ford
on 12/12/2015 12:10:26 AM with a score of 0
There's ... a lot wrong with this, I'm not even sure where to start.
Blank pages, poor spelling, improper punctuation, paths without any links, the fact that you asked me if I passed a puzzle in order to pass the puzzle, the fact that the pregnancy thing is an option if you're an Italian male, and the bizarre changes in font that make it look like you copy-pasted half your game...
I realize this is your first game, unless you have other accounts, but: 1, do not release unfinished games. If there are pages which have no link and no means to progress, making a path you put up impossible to play through (the female Italian) then it is unfinished.
2, there are proof-readers here.
3, it -really- says "I am not even actually trying" if you spell the same word two different ways from your title to your story description. Or from your description to your first page. You can and should figure out the correct spelling before posting, they're the first things we see! Also, yes, immigrant is spelled with an I and Italian has only one L. x.x
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Kiel_Farren
on 12/11/2015 9:01:08 AM with a score of 0
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