Player Comments on Julia

Sometimes a game makes you think about life, the universe and your perception of reality. This is not one of those games. The game starts with a character from breaking bad trying to rape the main character, but failing. Somehow it goes even further downhill from here.

I’m not here to insult anyone’s grammar, I mean mine definitely isn’t the best, but the plethora of spelling mistakes in this piece make me think the author didn’t spell check at all before posting. Very occasionally I skipped ahead because the sentence I was on was frankly unreadable.
Spell checking is very important.

Another problem with the game is that none of my choices seemed to make any difference to what was going on, despite their being a lot of endings I still felt incredibly railroaded which was definitely somewhat upsetting.

The one thing the game does well is that it seems to have been written satirically: if you hope and pray it’s written in this manner it’s just about bearable.

Jokes aside, this is a good try but could really benefit from looking over the minimum requirements for story games on the site. Also, what was the pen item for at the start of the game? I couldn’t find a use for it and I put myself through this multiple times.

I mean, it's not terrible. Had a decent length to it.
Unfortunately for the author I just couldn't take the story seriously. Apparently, Julia gets raped by Brian Cranston and potentially turns into Alan from Two And A Half Men XD)

"10 years later, Julia, now a famous chiropractor, meets Emile at a grocery store. It turns out that Emile, who couldn't find a girl, decided to turn gay. He was with his "life partner", Jon, his best friend in high school. They were both famous Youtube gamers after learning video editing in college. Julia, who was still single, bumped into a girl named Anna after meeting Emile and Jon, and she was a stone cold fox. Everything about her screamed "Red Hot!" and after seeing how well Emile was doing being gay, she contemplated going down the same path... Sorry! The rest of this I'm not going over, it's too weird! You can imagine it yourself, or write what Julia does next, it's create your own ending!. Nevertheless, congratulations! You found the weird ending! Try to find the others!"

Hee hee... the weird is the BESST ending! ;D

Ehh more or less ok

It was ok.....

i got the best ending1 woot woot! (the story said it was the best ending)

Lol, I had them argue every chance I could. Somehow won.

That's a messed up story.

Well, I became fully NAKED hanging from a fan, with no apparent item to stand on and tip over to hang myself, and the cops think that a naked girl hanging from a fan is a suicide. Such dumbass cops.

Grammar errors were annoying, but at least you're getting out there and giving it a go

Short, but what was with the pen?

:O... So, I thought if in the beginning I used the pen, I would be able to stab him... Looks like I was wrong because it only got me hanged...

REALLY COOL <--ROFL -->

I found 'em all.

BDP, I'd unpublish it to fix the grammar errors.

Correcting some grammatical errors in the story: WARNING! Potential spoiler alerts (YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!)







1. In the second ending, "ove" should be "over"
2. When John brings home groceries "you savior" should be "your savior"
3. During Dinner "less than accurate" should be "less than adequate"
4. On the page "Tension", "visible" should be "visibly".

These are the errors I found, there might be more, but hopefully this will clear up a little confusion. Sorry!

Thanks mscrl180, appreciate the support!

This was a pretty fun Game. There were some typos but nothing I couldn't work through. All and All a good effort.

And thank you Malkalack for commenting and supporting my story!

A couple of things, the pen is used early on, and one of the endings is a little incomplete, because it is pretty weird. You can complete it using the comment section if you please!

I just got sexually abused by Walter White..

This is actually pretty good. Good job, mate!

There are multiple endings of both good and bad! Try to find them all!