Player Comments on Nightfall in Cincinnati

What did I just read?

lovely

The intentional grammar mistakes were displeasing along with the sexual scenarios, also there was no real love or dating aspect to this story, and the random transitions were not amusing.

:| That's all I have to say about this. End the porno music indefinitely.

This was very WHAT THE RABBIT FUR?! I came to enjoy a story, not play crap that doesn't even make sense

There's only one path and this isn't even a Story GAME.

Linear much?

Rated 4/8. Hey, it IS more fun than homework. And I don't really know how to describe my feelings towards this story-that-is-hardly-a-game.

it sucks so much

I really had to pause when deciding on the rating I should give this "story". Yeah, sure it is the trolliest story of them all, but that was certainly entertaining.

I disapprove.

What the hell?

Even though I have no idea what the hell I just read, the "storygame" was a little entertaining due to its randomness and pure absurdity. Not that I want to encourage others making games like this, I'm giving it a 4/8. The spelling and grammar weren't atrocious and the entertainment factor gives a higher than average score for such a story.

What the actual fuck?

Its really a hartwarning story and if you dont get what the author is trying to get you to relize your dense or huh my mum read this to me everynighy for 17 years so i guess im being a little dubiased

C. ReA .TIVe jenius iLL be ReAdInG iT aNd ill LiKe tHe wAy it MmmaKes me fEel so If i hAd To PiCk ThE BeSt PArT Of ThIs GenEratIonS HANds DoWn BeSt StOry TelElEr iT woLd Be FoR sHirt For SHiRt ThAT

How is this apporiate for all ages -.-? Someone report this please. Best story ever though. Which is why it deserves a 1/8.

... *stares at comments section * ... *stares at ratings*

>_>' Yeah. Sure. That happened. There is literally one path here, I only get to choose between two links once and they both to the same scenes that lead to the same death with one taking a brief, nonsensical detour. Not much of a story, not much of a choice, and not really a game.

I don't believe for one second that anyone rated this story an 8 who wasn't you on your own account (and it's obvious by the current rating record that you did, indeed, rate it an 8,) or you as a guest. Considering the only other ratings here that aren't your own were left anonymously, that's a safe bet on my part.

Lol great

My god, this guy, this Mitch Adams-Fisher? He's just a seemingly endless pinnacle of talent and I mean just wow somebody givethis guy a medal or something.