Player Comments on patrol

There are a lot of choices so that does speak to a bit of effort, but the writing itself is just....not good and the author doesn't understand a lot of basic things about people just to start with.

Grammar errors, pages without links, abrupt endings. This story is bad and should be unpublished.

Just... just bad. This storygame makes me feel like I'm patrolling for sentence-level errors. No wonder our prison system is so overburdened. 2/8