Player Comments on Stuck at Montgomery Mall
Poor man's version of The Wal*Mart Game. A good try, at least, and I am glad to say that your storytelling has improved to an extent, and your use of items and variables, while a bit flawed, was a nice touch.
However, there are still grammar, storytelling, and spelling errors in many different places, and it seems as if you took most of your ideas directly from the Wal*Mart game.
On the plus side, a few lines did induce some chuckling. For example, "Other purposes include: knocking out terrorists." made me snicker.
on 4/10/2012 4:51:47 PM with a score of 0
You can't even get to Macy's There is no way to Win.
on 3/9/2018 11:21:17 AM with a score of 0
It's literally just a copy of the Wal*Mart game..
on 12/17/2016 5:29:00 PM with a score of 0
-- Tarbo134 on 10/16/2016 4:20:33 PM with a score of 0
Why is it on the Horror section? It is just a lame copy of The Walmart Game.
-- Deadly Lion on 7/20/2016 4:11:29 PM with a score of 0
Really boring...failed copy of the Walmart Game
-- Silverflame on 12/28/2015 8:27:49 PM with a score of 0
A few grammar and spelling errors in this story. It could certainly have more detail, but I understand this is one of the complex design structures, and well done for making it as well as you have.
on 9/24/2014 5:26:52 AM with a score of 0
Very similar to the Wal*mart game. There were quite a few bugs and grammar errors that you should probably fix.
on 9/5/2014 7:57:25 PM with a score of 0
I don't know for sure, but it looks like there's no way to win because of the bugs in this game. This game is also riddled with bad grammar, and the game in general is a bit too similar to "The Wal*Mart Game" for me to dismiss it as a coincidence.
on 1/28/2014 12:48:49 PM with a score of 0
I hate this game, and I am sure many people feel the same way. So I am going to tell you all the secret to winning here:
DO NOT go into the mechanics room before using the perfume at Salvation Army, otherwise you lose the perfume and am stuck in the game with no way to get out except by dying.
These dead end games are horrible. Please, edit it so that we can't go into the mechanics room before getting the terrorist outfit.
on 8/12/2013 4:43:15 AM with a score of 0
I'm sorry but I'm going to have to assume this is either badly bugged of the way to 'win' is just so random its beyond my comprehension. I spent a long time searching and trying every item in basically every screen but to no avail. So it gets the lowest rating until someone can tell me that its actually possible
on 4/5/2013 4:10:45 PM with a score of 0
on 4/18/2012 1:02:16 PM with a score of 0
I'll rate it higher once I finish it, but I'm confused as hell at the moment. I've gotten all the items I can possibly get, including the overalls, but it won't let me use them to disguise myself at the entrance to Macey's. If you don't want to give away hints and spoilers in the comments screen thing, just send me an email, either I'm doing something wrong, or the game's bugged. Great game though, can't wait to finish it.
on 4/13/2012 12:33:21 AM with a score of 0
-- XXXXXX on 4/12/2012 4:55:03 PM with a score of 0
Not bad, a little heavy on the hints, but I liked it =)
on 4/8/2012 8:43:06 PM with a score of 0